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Come to me

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Sudhir Iyer
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0 posted 04-29-2000 07:14 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Come to me
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In the night, searching for peace,
As I try hard, as I try again,
In the night, looking for sleep,
As I seek much, as I seek again.

Oh! How I miss you my dear,
All that is left is fear,
To you whom I belonged so clear,
You remain so far yet so near.

I feel the bed, Alas! It is empty,
I fight my tears, I weep all the same,
Cold bed with lonely covers,
Shadows from a single street light.

The ghosts of the night,
Have triggered this fight,
What have I done to cause this plight,
Come to me dear, hold me tight.

Let me feel you and make you feel me,
Let me love you and make you love me,
Let me hold you in these open arms,
Let me kiss you with these lonely lips.

Yet I lay in the crumpled bed,
The cold linen and the dirty sheets,
It is for you, for whom I crave,
It is for you, for whom I live.

Come to me please, my darling,
Be my soul saving grace,
Come to me please, my dear
Save me from this wretched place.




 Take each day as it comes,
Consider each day as a flight,
Try hard to succeed and fly,
Surely then you will reach some height.

But if by some chance you don’t,
Remember that tomorrow will always come.
Learn this well and learn this hard
That today’s efforts will pay for tomorrow’s fun.

A Crazy Monster, a.k.a Ski

© Copyright 2000 Sudhir Iyer - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 04-29-2000 07:26 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

----very sexy--except the part about the dirty sheets---talk to me after laundry day, love....winkie-eyes to ya....
Denise
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2 posted 04-29-2000 12:41 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

The longing is quite evident in this! Very nice!

Denise
DeEpMeLaNcHoLy
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3 posted 04-29-2000 12:44 PM       View Profile for DeEpMeLaNcHoLy   Email DeEpMeLaNcHoLy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DeEpMeLaNcHoLy

That was a really nice poem. i think one of the best ones I've ever read. If only i could have talwent like that to write. Well done!
Sudhir Iyer
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4 posted 04-30-2000 08:13 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Thank you all for the good words you are putting in for me.

I really am enjoying it here because of great people like you.

Sincerest regards,
sudhir.
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5 posted 06-03-2000 03:36 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

There is much anguish in this, my friend... very sad, indeed...

 Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

Sudhir Iyer
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6 posted 06-05-2000 03:00 PM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Karilea my friend, thanks for reading.
Your words mean a lot. Thanks again.

Regards, sudhir.

 
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