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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
Waves Send a soft dream my way, love, One that I cannot deny, A silent, sensuous stream of strength, Salient to simple eyes. All my dreams are yours, love, All of them in your eyes, The softest soothes settle in The strength of sense you bind. Carry this dream to reality, Like so many lives before, Our cells react to memories, While our spirits reach to soar. Like skin, finding warmth in the sand, Pulling it deep into core, All of our dreams are messages, Each returning to the shore. © 2000 CM Bailey & RA McElhany |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RAM, Interesting, enjoyed the read. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
RAM - this is wonderful poem --- netswan |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This is a lovely poem Ram and Corinne. Very well written. Sometimes it is hard to write when two people have different styles, but you guys certainly don't seem to have that problem. Marina |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
Thank you Seymour, netswan and Marina. Rick |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nicely done! This is beautiful! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rick and Corinne~ A joining of sprits ... this is just wonderful to read. 'Carry this dream to reality, Like so many lives before, Our cells react to memories, While our spirits reach to soar.' Yeah !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Aye, he didn't tell me he was going to post it here! Thanks, Sy, Netswan, Marina, Denise and Marge (and RAM of course)! |
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