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Marilyn
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0 posted 04-28-2000 12:12 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Marilyn

Remember me, oh foolish heart,
When your day is done.
Remember how I loved you,
That I'd only just begun.

Remember how I touched your life,
The look there in my eye.
Rememeber how I vowed my love,
Until the day I die.

I understand, oh foolish heart,
Some things can never be.
I understand the tears I cried,
You also shed for me.

I can not make you love me,
I can not make you care.
I can only set you free,
Knowing I'm always there.

Remember me, oh foolish heart,
With the setting of the sun.
Remember that I loved you once,
And I'd only just begun.




[This message has been edited by Marilyn (edited 04-28-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Marilyn - All Rights Reserved
Rex Allen McCoy
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1 posted 04-28-2000 12:29 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

Do we ever really let go?
we can switch the feelings around ... like the shell game ... but make no mistake ... the pea has not disappeared

beautiful Marilyn
Rex}>{{{{o>
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 04-28-2000 01:23 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Marilyn,
Good thoughts, good words, good poem.
Balladeer
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3 posted 04-28-2000 05:25 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

You have nothing to fear, Marilyn. You are not the type one forgets....good writing.
Martie
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4 posted 04-28-2000 05:55 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

This is beautiful, Marilyn!
LoveBug
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5 posted 04-28-2000 07:40 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

A wonderful poem.. love never really dies. Great job.

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
First__Knight
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6 posted 04-28-2000 08:30 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

This is by far my favorite poem of yours Marilyn.  And one of my all time favorites...

 A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her.


Denise
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7 posted 04-28-2000 08:38 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is very touching, Marilyn. Well done!

Denise
Dawn Eclipse
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8 posted 04-28-2000 08:43 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

That was a beautiful poem.  Full of meaning, love and a heart of gold.  We never truly let go, but that isn't always a bad thing.  I enjoyed it very much.


 "It is in our aloneness
that we recognize our oneness,
even as the single droplet of water
knows also that it is the sea."Daniel

*Cassie Roseen*


Christopher
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9 posted 04-28-2000 10:39 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Indeed m'dear...isn't true love something which grows and grows with each passing day? On the mark Marilyn!
Aimster
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10 posted 04-28-2000 11:15 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

marilyn

i really felt this piece with my whole being. not letting go as everyone has stated isn't necessarily a bad thing. sometimes memories make us stronger and better people.

take care and smile!
amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
Marilyn
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11 posted 04-28-2000 11:48 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Rex...Thankyou for your wonderful comment. Indeed, we never stop loving when it is true.

Sy..thankyou my friend.  

Mike...My sweet, I am not afraid of being forgotten just discarded.  

Martie..thankyou.  

Lovebug...Truer words have never been spoken.  

David..you make me blush.  

Denise...Thankyou.  

Dawn...it is never a bad thing. Love is  what makes us strong even if it is not near on a daily basis.

Chris....It grows with each day, each hour and with each breath if it is the real thing.  

Amy..you are so right my friend.  


Ethan Halo
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12 posted 04-29-2000 12:19 AM       View Profile for Ethan Halo   Email Ethan Halo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ethan Halo's Home Page   View IP for Ethan Halo

Well done. I like the rhythm, but the message is why i wiped my eyes. Keep it up.

 We all got somethin' we need to atone for.
Cerenity
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13 posted 04-30-2000 01:59 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Marilyn,

This is just truely beautiful,it brings wonderful emotions to my heart your words of poetry, thank you so much.

Cerenity
Marge Tindal
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14 posted 04-30-2000 07:27 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Marilyn~
Such loving thoughts from a beautiful soul.

I believe that every love is true ...
as long as we're in it.
~*Marge*~




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

mete out
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15 posted 05-02-2000 04:27 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***marilyn,
this poem is beautiful
so stark but with so many intricacies
love, in whatever form can never really be forgotten.


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


hoot_owl_rn
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16 posted 05-02-2000 10:27 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Marilyn, a beautiful poem, thanks for making sure I saw this one. I think the heart never forgets my friend. Hope all is well with you. Miss you. Hugs  
passing shadows
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17 posted 05-02-2004 09:39 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

this is precious!
 
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