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Remember Me |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Remember me, oh foolish heart, When your day is done. Remember how I loved you, That I'd only just begun. Remember how I touched your life, The look there in my eye. Rememeber how I vowed my love, Until the day I die. I understand, oh foolish heart, Some things can never be. I understand the tears I cried, You also shed for me. I can not make you love me, I can not make you care. I can only set you free, Knowing I'm always there. Remember me, oh foolish heart, With the setting of the sun. Remember that I loved you once, And I'd only just begun. [This message has been edited by Marilyn (edited 04-28-2000).] |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Do we ever really let go? we can switch the feelings around ... like the shell game ... but make no mistake ... the pea has not disappeared  beautiful Marilyn Rex}>{{{{o> |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marilyn, Good thoughts, good words, good poem. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You have nothing to fear, Marilyn. You are not the type one forgets....good writing. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is beautiful, Marilyn! |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
A wonderful poem.. love never really dies. Great job. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
This is by far my favorite poem of yours Marilyn. And one of my all time favorites... A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very touching, Marilyn. Well done! Denise |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
That was a beautiful poem. Full of meaning, love and a heart of gold. We never truly let go, but that isn't always a bad thing. I enjoyed it very much. "It is in our aloneness that we recognize our oneness, even as the single droplet of water knows also that it is the sea."Daniel *Cassie Roseen* |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Indeed m'dear...isn't true love something which grows and grows with each passing day? On the mark Marilyn! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
marilyn i really felt this piece with my whole being. not letting go as everyone has stated isn't necessarily a bad thing. sometimes memories make us stronger and better people. take care and smile! amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Rex...Thankyou for your wonderful comment. Indeed, we never stop loving when it is true. Sy..thankyou my friend. Mike...My sweet, I am not afraid of being forgotten just discarded. Martie..thankyou.  Lovebug...Truer words have never been spoken. David..you make me blush.  Denise...Thankyou. Dawn...it is never a bad thing. Love is what makes us strong even if it is not near on a daily basis. Chris....It grows with each day, each hour and with each breath if it is the real thing. Amy..you are so right my friend. |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
Well done. I like the rhythm, but the message is why i wiped my eyes. Keep it up. We all got somethin' we need to atone for. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marilyn, This is just truely beautiful,it brings wonderful emotions to my heart your words of poetry, thank you so much. Cerenity |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marilyn~ Such loving thoughts from a beautiful soul. I believe that every love is true ... as long as we're in it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***marilyn, this poem is beautiful so stark but with so many intricacies love, in whatever form can never really be forgotten. I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Marilyn, a beautiful poem, thanks for making sure I saw this one. I think the heart never forgets my friend. Hope all is well with you. Miss you. Hugs |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is precious! |
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