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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Author's Note: This is one of several poems I have written, involving long-distance romance. Any of you who have been there know that it's a "tough row to hoe," but it's not all bad! This poem is about the "upside" of long-distance romance: really fires the anticipation and the imagination, and gets the creative juices flowing! If If I could be a sparrow, And could fly up in the blue, I'd write your name across the sky - Then, wing my way to you. If I could be a wizard, And could ride upon a star, I'd bid it, with the speed of light, To take me where you are. And, if, one day, my fondest dream Should suddenly come true, You'd find me nestled in your arms - Forever loving you. -Troy J. Hoecherl- © Troy J Hoecherl All Rights Reserved Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
this poem is a short reminder of my relationship a couple months ago. But i have been convinced that long distance relationships aren't the answer. I loved it and thank you for posting such a short and sweet peom.  |
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DestinysCharm Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 90 |
~smile~ Nicely done I like this. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Troy, Good one I really enjoyed. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lovely poem....I really enjoyed this one! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
you think very highly of yoursefl, i can tell quite easily. why the copyrights? you can trust us. and personally, i don't like to read copyrighted poetry in a forum like this one. it is kind of ummm...egotistical, you know? anyway, great piece, man. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Troy* I really enjoyed this point of view...from being burned by long distance love it's easy to forget the good things about it Brandon....All the poems are copyrighted...take a look at the bottom of one of yours. Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Having never been in a long distance relationship, I don't know how I'd feel but I suspect it would be just like this. Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
This is lovely -Troy -- Short sweet, and dear --- BRANDON - in case you come back in here. I am getting rather sore at you. - I jumped on you already - and I will do it again. Troy is just a wonderful - wonderful man, and a very dear friend -- whose confidence needs some boosting -- And, no, you don't copyright your work because someone might steal it. You copyright your work because PEOPLE DO STEAL IT. Hugs to you Troy netswan |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Troy, Ahhhhh....this brings back memories. Great writing as always. Very sweet, my friend!!  Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Thanks to all of my friends who responded! I really appreciated all of the responsible and adult comments. Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very sweet, Troy! Denise |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
Who is this Brandon guy? Cheeky, I'll say. |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
Sorry, Troy, cool poem as ever. Kisses |
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Lone Ranger Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 92Salvador , Bahia , Brazil |
Wonderful!! I REALLY relate to this poem!!Just loved it! "Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free It was always thus and always thus will be" Prof. Keating Dead Poets Society |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Denise - thank you for your kind response! pen of passion - to answer your question: he's just another bump on life's highway, LOL! Thanks for the kisses (blushing) - make sure they're on the cheek though, okay? I mean, I am a very happily married man! Lone Ranger - thank you! I'm glad it spoke to you. Again, thanks for all your wonderful comments! Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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DiObear Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 66Switzerland |
I've been in a long distance relationship (Minnesota to Switzerland) for almost a year. This poem is wonderful and I think I'll send it to him. Thanks for writing it. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Troy~ Damn, I think HIGHLY of this poem AND the man that wrote it ! ! This is just a precious piece, Troy. I think it can apply to anyone in a relationship ... shucks, that little bird can just fly down the block and sing to me anytime. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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