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Sudhir Iyer
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0 posted 2000-04-28 10:57 AM


Defining myself!
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If I could catch a rainbow
I would do it just for you
And share with you its beauty
On the days you're feeling blue.

If I could build a mountain
You could call your very own
A place to find serenity
A place to spend time alone.

If I could take your troubles
I would toss them into the sea
but all these things I'm finding
are impossible for me.

I cannot build a mountain
Nor catch a rainbow fair
But let me be what I know best
A friend that's always there.

------ This was written quite some time back, just wanted to share it with all my friends here -------

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 Take each day as it comes,
Consider each day as a flight,
Try hard to succeed and fly,
Surely then you will reach some height.

But if by some chance you don’t,
Remember that tomorrow will always come.
Learn this well and learn this hard
That today’s efforts will pay for tomorrow’s fun.

A Crazy Monster, a.k.a Ski





[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 05-08-2000).]

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Jeffrey Carter
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1 posted 2000-04-28 04:01 PM


I don't know how this went so long without a reply. It is brilliantly penned. A friend is what you have here as well as a fan.

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

Sudhir Iyer
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2 posted 2000-04-29 05:48 AM


Thanks a lot Jeffrey, you made my day!



[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 04-29-2000).]

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3 posted 2000-04-29 06:20 AM


Ahhh...I always respond to the mere mention of 'serenity'....lovely!  Thank you!
Sudhir Iyer
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4 posted 2000-05-02 04:05 AM


If there is a place to find serenity, it is this, it is this, it is this (is this not true serenity???)


regards.

Sudhir Iyer
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5 posted 2000-05-08 07:32 AM


being cheeky, trying to get more people to see this one  
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