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Writer's Block

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Elizabeth Santos
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Writers Block

Why do they call it “writer’s block”
Why can’t they call it “writer’s pause”
An interlude can be unlocked
Sometimes we tarry just because

At times the mind must hesitate
To stop a while and catch its breath
A little time to sit and wait
Should never be construed as death

A block sounds like a mass of brick
A granite slab inside your brain
A barrier of boulder thick
A “writers interim” sounds more sane

Why not call it “writers shroud”
A see-through veil through which we breath
And walk with head held tall and proud
Though in our silence we bereave

I tell them it’s a routine daze
For mind to achieve the things it ought
A poet’s resting, idling phase
Of observation, sense and thought

So call it anything you want
“Poet's pause”, or “mimic’s mock”
But let me stop and catch my breath
And please don’t call it “writers block”

The mind’s observing while it floats
And I am simply taking notes

Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 04-28-2000 10:23 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I've always thought that writer's block
Was really just a bunch of crock.
The phrase denotes a thought foreboding
Let's just call it "writer's reloading"!

Something you'll never have to worry about, by the way. I love it all.....
Martie
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2 posted 04-28-2000 11:18 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Yes, excellent ideas and poem...my writer is taking a vacation to the shores of Lovely...but, she'll be back!
Corinne
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3 posted 04-28-2000 11:31 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

I prefer to think of it as my muse musing.

Great little poem, Liz!

Corinne
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 04-28-2000 11:42 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Elizabeth,
You set the block with seed to flower
And it will explode again with power.
Excellent poem.
Love Sy
ESP
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5 posted 04-28-2000 01:05 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Writer's interlude sounds better to me! This is a great poem, Liz! Next time I get writer's um er, you know!, I'll read it to make me feel less blah!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
Paul Hoekman
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6 posted 04-28-2000 04:47 PM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

I love this, as always Liz great work.
I know I've had writers something
seems I've missed a whole room since
I've been back.
I call my delay of writing.
WRITER HAD A BABY!
and gets no sleep
and has no time.
great to see so many have come aboard.
LoveBug
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7 posted 04-28-2000 07:48 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

Liz, this is a great poem. I don't feel so bad about having "writer's pause" now!  

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
Denise
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Okay, we'll call it anything bur writer's block!! I absolutely love your closing couplet!

Denise
kitkat
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9 posted 04-29-2000 09:51 PM       View Profile for kitkat   Email kitkat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kitkat

I liked this. It was witty and kinda andy rooneyish(Iliked his commentarys)
I like the phrase--poets pause  
lucky
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10 posted 04-30-2000 12:14 AM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

Uh, uh, uh, I was temporarily day-dream-sleep-ing did I miss anything..?

That's OK if it's in my head it's sure to come around again..; my mother said.

 
netswan
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11 posted 04-30-2000 02:06 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Wonderful! Great Poem and you are very
right about writer's block

netswan
TearsFromHeaven
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12 posted 05-01-2000 03:52 AM       View Profile for TearsFromHeaven   Email TearsFromHeaven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TearsFromHeaven

Elizabeth,
     My friend TerryW told me that you were an incredible poet, and I believe every word he said.  This was incredible.  And a true depiction of "Writer's Block".  Anyone who can weave such beautiful words is truly gifted.   Thank You!

 Trust Instinct. Instinct will keep an animal alive, but Logic can kill a man.

Richard "Rickey" N. Boydstun, Jr.
Cerenity
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13 posted 05-02-2000 08:36 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Liz,

There is just simply nothing on earth that you can not turn in to pure sweet delight is there. Loved this very muches.

Cerenity
A.C.Turner
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14 posted 05-02-2000 09:00 AM       View Profile for A.C.Turner   Email A.C.Turner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A.C.Turner

Very clever! I will never call it writer's block again. Peace ACT.
Sunshine
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15 posted 05-02-2000 09:27 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Perhaps I should call mine "writer's reverie..." but certainly, you are not affected by any of the above, Elizabeth!
Janet Marie
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16 posted 05-02-2000 10:23 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

and you float with grace my friend...
this was perfect!!
what a sweet read!!
I have to concur with Sunshine...
I know it happens to all of us...but its hard to imagine anything keeping you from creating these works of joy.
take care Liz,
jm
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oh Liz! REPOST!
 
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