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A new one...work in progress... |
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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
october's juniper fallen, measured, down to me, a swirl's trajectory; dismally i stared, and conspired with the blanketing ground. to interject, and be-snatch you... i see a swimming; composing swift waves; doppleganger. burning trees around alter-egos seeking shaded congruency. faux. strike a mistake. indigo gel melts with a dripping sky and air cuts my ear, resounds do some gracefulness with; as i, myself; your's to fall forever, ever fading and falling, severed, staining cryptic photochrome. pinch the Moabittess in folds of hazy cellophane plus the fogging of our serene scape; a sudden flash... an outer-worldly minute, please. bring into future the appeased past. huff. the planets move. |
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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
very interesting read, though I have no idea on how to comment on it other than that. Parker |
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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
Think of it as one person eyeing their other falling slowly from a tre. (rockabye baby) Then picture the image as distorted by time. Then fill in the rest with what you will. |
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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You have a question or two, Brandon? |
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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
Questions of what? might I ask? |
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