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Wild Fire

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Sudhir Iyer
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0 posted 04-28-2000 08:35 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Wild Fire

Like wild fire, deep craving,
Painful anguish, crazy longing,
I’m going mad, going insane,
Feeling terrible, feeling the craze.

Is this you or is it a dream?
Is this a bowl of madness?
Is this a case of turbulence?
Or is it just love, is this love?

How can I know, how do I guess,
Never felt like this before,
Never happened to me, never,
I feel strange, I feel great.

Is this you or is it a dream?
Is this a bowl of madness?
Is this a case of turmoil?
Or is it just love, is this love?




 Take each day as it comes,
Consider each day as a flight,
Try hard to succeed and fly,
Surely then you will reach some height.

But if by some chance you don’t,
Remember that tomorrow will always come.
Learn this well and learn this hard
That today’s efforts will pay for tomorrow’s fun.

A Crazy Monster, a.k.a Ski
© Copyright 2000 Sudhir Iyer - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 04-28-2000 04:03 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

BTTT for this one too
Sudhir Iyer
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2 posted 05-02-2000 03:59 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Thanks for the BTTT, I am sorry to be too late, the last few days, have been pretty hectic.

regards - sudhir.

"Smell, Taste, Sound, Sight, Touch are 5 senses, the 6th sense is a movie." - The millenium Statement by crazy monster a.k.a. ski
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and yes it IS...all the crazy thoughts of love--well, ALMOST all, portrayed here...

genuine and touching...
Sudhir Iyer
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4 posted 05-03-2000 12:32 PM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Thanks for reading and posting your appreciative comments, Serenity.

Regards, sudhir
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5 posted 05-03-2000 12:43 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

"Is this a bowl of madness?"

What an interesting poetic commentary on the newness of love, "Wild Fire" indeed!

~ Claire


 Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau
Sudhir Iyer
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6 posted 05-08-2000 07:34 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Claire,
Its a wild fire,
Raw desire,
Lovers declare!

Thanks for reading and passing on some great comments.

Regards, sudhir
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7 posted 05-08-2000 08:47 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Not what I expected, but meeting all revised expectations!
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Sudhir, Thank you for the great.


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You brought a smile of remembrance to my face Sudhir ... passionate and exciting indeed! Loved this ...

/Kit
Sudhir Iyer
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10 posted 05-18-2000 04:07 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Sunshine,
I know what you mean : Quite different from the title, a completely different line of thought, maybe. I am glad I met your revised expectations...

Seymour, Thanks for the thank you...  

Kit, I feel contented that this poem brought back some of your sweet memories back to you...

Thanks to you all for reading,
Regards,
Sudhir.

 
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