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Wild Fire
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Wild Fire |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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Wild Fire Like wild fire, deep craving, Painful anguish, crazy longing, I’m going mad, going insane, Feeling terrible, feeling the craze. Is this you or is it a dream? Is this a bowl of madness? Is this a case of turbulence? Or is it just love, is this love? How can I know, how do I guess, Never felt like this before, Never happened to me, never, I feel strange, I feel great. Is this you or is it a dream? Is this a bowl of madness? Is this a case of turmoil? Or is it just love, is this love? Take each day as it comes, Consider each day as a flight, Try hard to succeed and fly, Surely then you will reach some height. But if by some chance you don’t, Remember that tomorrow will always come. Learn this well and learn this hard That today’s efforts will pay for tomorrow’s fun. A Crazy Monster, a.k.a Ski |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
BTTT for this one too |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks for the BTTT, I am sorry to be too late, the last few days, have been pretty hectic. regards - sudhir. "Smell, Taste, Sound, Sight, Touch are 5 senses, the 6th sense is a movie." - The millenium Statement by crazy monster a.k.a. ski |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and yes it IS...all the crazy thoughts of love--well, ALMOST all, portrayed here... genuine and touching... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks for reading and posting your appreciative comments, Serenity. Regards, sudhir |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"Is this a bowl of madness?" What an interesting poetic commentary on the newness of love, "Wild Fire" indeed! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Claire, Its a wild fire, Raw desire, Lovers declare! Thanks for reading and passing on some great comments. Regards, sudhir |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Not what I expected, but meeting all revised expectations! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Thank you for the great. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You brought a smile of remembrance to my face Sudhir ... passionate and exciting indeed! Loved this ... /Kit |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Sunshine, I know what you mean : Quite different from the title, a completely different line of thought, maybe. I am glad I met your revised expectations... Seymour, Thanks for the thank you...  Kit, I feel contented that this poem brought back some of your sweet memories back to you... Thanks to you all for reading, Regards, Sudhir. |
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