very cool poem!!
reads like a song even.
very good visual and emotional imagery.
"my tears were freed by her beauty
and rushed by her goodbyes"
very cool line
enjoyed the read
Is it too much to find an answer,
Is it too much to hold you close.
Is it too much to find a reason,
Is it too much to free my soul --
From self control ...
And I know you're always waiting for me ...
You take me far away,
And I know you're holding me ...
And it's better now ...