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Till the Love

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desperado
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0 posted 04-27-2000 10:15 PM       View Profile for desperado   Email desperado   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for desperado


as the wind danced with her vibrant hair
and the moonlight sparkled in her eyes
my tears were freed by her beauty
and rushed by her goodbyes
her tanned skin so sleek and smooth
my body aches to feel her energy
to hold her electric body
as it's pulse creates a soothing harmony
oh her lips of absolute pleasure
to touch them would be a treasure
yet to kiss would fuel a wild fire
rivaled only by my hearts desire
and her vioce is as soft as a dream
covering my body with it's arrousing sound
so I'll close my eyes and wait once more
till the love of my life can be found...




 "There were times in my life
when I was going insane
tryin to walk through
the pain
when I lost my grip
and I hit the floor
yeah I thought I could leave but couldn't get out the door" - Aerosmith "Amazing"
© Copyright 2000 James Webster - All Rights Reserved
netswan
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1 posted 04-27-2000 11:08 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Desperado - this is well written -
I enjoyed it a lot.

netswan
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2 posted 04-28-2000 01:13 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Desperado~
This one has *sighs* written all over it.

'my tears were freed by her beauty
and rushed by her goodbyes'

What a unique poetic thought.
I sure enjoyed the read of this one.
~*Marge*~


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Janet Marie
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3 posted 04-28-2000 01:21 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

WOW...
very cool poem!!
reads like a song even.
very good visual and emotional imagery.

"my tears were freed by her beauty
and rushed by her goodbyes"

very cool line
enjoyed the read
jm


 Is it too much to find an answer,
Is it too much to hold you close.
Is it too much to find a reason,
Is it too much to free my soul --
From self control ...
And I know you're always waiting for me ...
You take me far away,
And I know you're holding me ...
And it's better now ...
~vertical horizon~


kristi
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4 posted 04-28-2000 02:22 AM       View Profile for kristi   Email kristi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kristi

Great poem.  If only all men were so passionate!

 Two men look through the same bars. One sees the mud, and one the stars.-?
pen of passion
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Desperato, very nice.  I enjoyed the read.
desperado
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6 posted 04-30-2000 02:24 PM       View Profile for desperado   Email desperado   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for desperado

thanks for the comments guys.  here I am sunday afternoon, sunburned and worn out, but the weekend was great.  hehe  thanks once again.
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7 posted 05-02-2004 09:24 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

hopefully you won't wait long
 
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