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You Know If This Is For You |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA 
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Oh words just cannot explain how big a fool I've been I lost the trust I held so dear 'cause I fell into a sin The words of 'Im sorry' just don't seem to be enough to simply state how wrong I was for all that rotten stuff I never meant to hurt you or make you mad at me and if I could, I'd turn back time and I'm sure you might agree You brought down the bricks of my defenses when I swore I wouldn't trust again the last time was the last time I would ever let someone in And I don't know how it happened but it happened just the same you tore down the walls I built and it's only me to blame 'cause while I allowed the bricks to fall down I wouldn't allow myself to trust so I did and said the things I did and now it's I that you distrust So here I sit tonight with guilt wrapped around my heart... To gain back the trust I lost in you our friendship must restart! This poem is for someone truly special in my heart that, through my own stupidity, I hurt. There are NO possible words I can say to describe how truly sorry I am and how bad I feel, and my reasons are meaningless, so I wont even begin to give them. To whom this poem is for (you know who you are)...I love you and I am truly, deeply, HONESTLY, sorry.. I hope one day I can gain your trus back if you allow me to! Melanie I'm not waving, I'm drowning! [This message has been edited by Echo Rhayne (edited 04-30-2000).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I don't know how anyone can say no to that....good luck  |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Echo, such a great poem -- so hard to say you are sorry and admit that you were wrong. So well done. I hope it helps you earn your friend back. netswan |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I really don't know what to say at the moment! You've brought me to tears. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Melanie, Everyone falters at times it's human nature, to forgive is also human nature, so please forgive yourself and I'm sure in time this person you love will be there by your side. Please stay strong your special to many people. [This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 04-27-2000).] |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Ruth...Glad to see you back, feeling better? netswan...yes, it is hard, VERY HARD!! What else can I do? I've never felt like this before, so I'll cry an ol' blue river, in the middle of the floor. Now I'm up to my ears in tears... IM SORRY...IM SORRY...IM SORRY =*( L.D...Thank you, but forgiving myself, might take longer than having this person forgive me! *sigh* but thats my fault! I'm not waving, I'm drowning! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
good to see you again echo...sad poem well done i hope it works for you |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
God bless you, I just went through something so hauntingly similiar, a friendship ruined, from something I did unintenionally, it hurts doesn't it? And you feel the magic is gone and nothing can bring it back, and you're wounded aren't you? take peace in knowing you are not alone! Kathleen |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Echo~ I can see here that you truly mean what you have said, flows straight from the heart. I'm sure they will forgive Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Melanie instead of going into it here, cause I really don't know what to say, I'll send you an email! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a heartfelt write |
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