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You Know If This Is For You

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Echo Rhayne
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since 09-17-99
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Canyon Country, CA


0 posted 04-27-2000 09:28 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Oh words just cannot explain
how big a fool I've been
I lost the trust I held so dear
'cause I fell into a sin

The words of 'Im sorry'
just don't seem to be enough
to simply state how wrong I was
for all that rotten stuff

I never meant to hurt you
or make you mad at me
and if I could, I'd turn back time
and I'm sure you might agree

You brought down the bricks of my defenses
when I swore I wouldn't trust again
the last time was the last time
I would ever let someone in

And I don't know how it happened
but it happened just the same
you tore down the walls I built
and it's only me to blame

'cause while I allowed the bricks to fall down
I wouldn't allow myself to trust
so I did and said the things I did
and now it's I that you distrust

So here I sit tonight
with guilt wrapped around my heart...

To gain back the trust I lost in you
our friendship must restart!


This poem is for someone truly special in my heart that, through my own stupidity, I hurt.  There are NO possible words I can say to describe how truly sorry I am and how bad I feel, and my reasons are meaningless, so I wont even begin to give them.  To whom this poem is for (you know who you are)...I love you and I am truly, deeply, HONESTLY, sorry.. I hope one day I can gain your trus back if you allow me to!
    Melanie



 I'm not waving, I'm drowning!






[This message has been edited by Echo Rhayne (edited 04-30-2000).]
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hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


1 posted 04-27-2000 09:40 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I don't know how anyone can say no to that....good luck  
netswan
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since 03-28-2000
Posts 1395
Washington


2 posted 04-27-2000 09:43 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Echo, such a great poem -- so hard to
say you are sorry and admit that you
were wrong.  So well done. I hope it
helps you earn your friend back.

netswan
WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
Posts 9561
Illinois


3 posted 04-27-2000 10:40 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I really don't know what to say at the moment! You've brought me to tears.
Lost Dreamer
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since 06-20-99
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Normal, Illinois


4 posted 04-27-2000 10:43 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Melanie, Everyone falters at times it's human nature, to forgive is also human nature, so please forgive yourself and I'm sure in time this person you love will be there by your side. Please stay strong your  special to many people.  

[This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 04-27-2000).]
Echo Rhayne
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Canyon Country, CA


5 posted 04-28-2000 01:19 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Ruth...Glad to see you back, feeling better?

netswan...yes, it is hard, VERY HARD!!

What else can I do?  I've never felt like this before, so I'll cry an ol' blue river, in the middle of the floor.  Now I'm up to my ears in tears...
IM SORRY...IM SORRY...IM SORRY =*(

L.D...Thank you, but forgiving myself, might take longer than having this person forgive me!  *sigh*  but thats my fault!




 I'm not waving, I'm drowning!


wayoutwalt
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since 06-22-99
Posts 5106
TEXAS (it's all big)


6 posted 04-28-2000 01:23 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

good to see you again echo...sad poem well done i hope it works for you
Irish Rose
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7 posted 04-28-2000 07:34 AM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

God bless you, I just went through something so hauntingly similiar, a friendship ruined, from something I did unintenionally, it hurts doesn't it?
And you feel the magic is gone and nothing can bring it back, and you're wounded aren't you?
take peace in knowing you are not alone!

 Kathleen

tracie66
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since 01-18-2000
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Victoria, Australia


8 posted 04-28-2000 07:44 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Echo~
I can see here that you truly mean what you have said, flows straight from the heart. I'm sure they will forgive  
Tracie~


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 07-22-99
Posts 9561
Illinois


9 posted 04-28-2000 07:46 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Melanie instead of going into it here, cause I really don't know what to say, I'll send you an email!
passing shadows
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10 posted 05-02-2004 09:08 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

a heartfelt write
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