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Effigy
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0 posted 04-27-2000 05:56 PM       View Profile for Effigy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Effigy

Somewhere in the middle is where Iíve been
Certainly there is no beginning
Undoubtedly there is no end
Iíve been caught up in mix
Canít find the way out
With nowhere to go
Lost in the spin.
Around again
Lost in the spin
With nowhere to go
Canít find the way out
Iíve been caught up in mix
Undoubtedly there is no end
Certainly there is no beginning
Somewhere in the middle is where Iíve been



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1 posted 04-27-2000 06:10 PM       View Profile for 7   Email 7   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 7

Wow! That's one of the coolest ideas I've ever seen! Does it have a special meaning or were you just playing around... no wait, "just" doesn't belong there, playing around is certainly more than a just. Definitely the product of more than a lot of my works.

I applaud you, Effigy.

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Effigy
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2 posted 04-27-2000 06:25 PM       View Profile for Effigy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Effigy

7 - thanks. I'm glad that you liked it. It was more or less a word game for me, but it does reflect some of how I felt at the time.



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hmmm... Am I seeing some inspiration from "Read This Poem From the Bottom Up"? Very nice. Nice ryhme, nice meter, nice spin. Mi Gusta Mucho.
 
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