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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief 
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Somewhere in the middle is where I’ve been Certainly there is no beginning Undoubtedly there is no end I’ve been caught up in mix Can’t find the way out With nowhere to go Lost in the spin. Around again Lost in the spin With nowhere to go Can’t find the way out I’ve been caught up in mix Undoubtedly there is no end Certainly there is no beginning Somewhere in the middle is where I’ve been understanding is misunderstood |
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7 Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 113Amherst, MA, USA |
Wow! That's one of the coolest ideas I've ever seen! Does it have a special meaning or were you just playing around... no wait, "just" doesn't belong there, playing around is certainly more than a just. Definitely the product of more than a lot of my works. I applaud you, Effigy.  7 |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
7 - thanks. I'm glad that you liked it. It was more or less a word game for me, but it does reflect some of how I felt at the time. understanding is misunderstood |
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forne_marin Member
since 2004-04-13
Posts 140Spartanburg, South Carolina |
hmmm... Am I seeing some inspiration from "Read This Poem From the Bottom Up"? Very nice. Nice ryhme, nice meter, nice spin. Mi Gusta Mucho. |
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