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ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

0 posted 2000-04-27 04:07 PM


Thank you(For Liz)

Words woven in to a web of emotion,
Lines flowing gently into verse.
Stories painted by the pen of a poet,
Without whom life would be so much worse.

Images dance delightfully before my eyes,
As my soul floats on clouds of pleasure.
Your poem skipping gracefully across a page
Is a joy I cannot measure.

Exquisite rhyme satiates my being,
Blissful serenity soon follows.
Your words captivate my imagination,
Feeling no longer seems hollow.

Inspiration caresses my heart
As wisdom is gently imparted upon me.
All this and more I find
In reading your lovely poetry.
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Liz, this is a humble attempt to thank you for the two poems you have written me and also to express heartfelt appreciation of all your beautiful poetry.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


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 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."


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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
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Mobile, AL
1 posted 2000-04-27 04:15 PM


Beautifully done.   I think she will love it.  

 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"

Martie
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2 posted 2000-04-27 04:18 PM


This is wonderful, Lizzy!  She is remarkable, isn't she.
Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
3 posted 2000-04-27 06:59 PM


Dearest Lizzie,
You have warmed my heart beyond measure with this absolutely beautiful verse. I happened onto page 2 and spotted it (whew)where it must have slipped while I was cooking dinner. The poem is a beauty and straight from the heart. You do write so well, and I am so honored and proud of this wonderful poem
I don't know how to thank you, but It will remain in my book of treasured poems forever
Love you
Liz

Marina
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since 2000-02-10
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Pickering, Ontario
4 posted 2000-04-27 11:12 PM


Lovely ESP. I am sure she will great appreciate it.

Marina

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