Remembering when life was lovely, no-one threatened our existence

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Open Poetry #7

Remembering when life was lovely, no-one threatened our existence

rene
Member

since 2000-04-24

Posts 113

0 posted 2000-04-27 10:29 AM

it's through
believing me
a touch will kill
the spine bends gently

inside me
something breaks
the blood it takes
is no use to me

midnight hour
alone
with radio
release me

a lying river
flows
beneath my bones
my mind has plenty

so glad you had
your way
it's not my way
conceal me

and now
i don't know how
i have to find
a clean life

[This message has been edited by rene (edited 04-27-2000).]

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

1 posted 2000-04-27 03:49 PM

I liked the feel of this one although I don't think I understood it completely.

rene
Member

since 2000-04-24

Posts 113

2 posted 2000-04-28 03:04 AM

i think the adult forum is the only place it could be explained, but it is a about a vulgar existence

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