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If I Could Paint The World

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Cerenity
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If I Could Paint The World

A splash of blue Iíd through
to the wind, and watch it
take flight, across the sky it
would go to meet the
morning light.

The greens Iíve picked from
dark to light, tossing here
and there, to make the trees
and shrubs twirl in delight.

Pinks and reds all shades
do I use to fill the hearts of
people every were, who does
not enjoy the melody that
these colors bring to the
souls plight.

The sun does shine with its
light so bright, but not quiet
enough yellow for me, so I will
sweep the land with daisies
sunflowers and daffodils.

We still need more color to
fill the hearts that just stay
in despair so how about some
purple and some umber and
maybe  a little splash of white
to let them know that their
hearts desires can come true.


To top of this paining of mine
I will add the secret touch of
lifeís pleasures and place the
birds and bees just so in hopes
to see a smile from all of you
to let you know just how much
I care.

You see, your day can be any
thing you want it to be, all
it takes is a little paint some
imagination and a heart to
fill in the beauty of lifeís
dreams.

By,  Cerenity

© Copyright 2000 Ellen Ware - All Rights Reserved
Lost Dreamer
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1 posted 04-27-2000 10:48 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Cerenity, This is quite lovely, actually better than lovely, it's heart-felt and beautiful, nice job I love it.  
Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 04-27-2000 10:58 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Here, you paint your heart and it is a rainbow
Liz
killer222
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since 04-06-2000
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3 posted 04-27-2000 11:19 AM       View Profile for killer222   Email killer222   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for killer222

The world suddenly seems more colourful after reading this.

I think there are some bits of black and grey you've missed  



 "shun the frumious Bandersnatch!"
Killer222 :)

amazon_lover
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4 posted 04-27-2000 01:13 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Hi Cerenity!
U're really amazing!
You're so clear in the portrayal of the world that I feel confident now of having a world like that.

(((((((((hugs))))))))))))))))
A_L
Cerenity
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5 posted 04-27-2000 06:25 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Thank you everyone for your the kind replys.

Cerenity
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I was reading other poetry,but I thought,I have to reply this Because it's beautiful poem and I love it.
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very uplifting write!
 
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