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Listen, Look, Breathe In, Feel
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Listen, Look, Breathe In, Feel |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Listen, Look, Breathe In, Feel Listen Can you hear the silence? The earth holds its breath As it awaits the dawn. Look Can you see it beginning? The first faint rays of the sun Paint the horizon with crimson softness. Breathe in Can you smell the freshness? The sweet morning air Revives the dormant world. Feel Can you sense a stirring? All of nature awakens To bask in solar warmth. Listen Can you hear the stillness? A new tomorrow Is just moments away. Look Can you see the possibilities? Another day - a fresh, clean page To be filled with whatever we desire. Breathe in Can you smell the promise? The sweet breath of freedom Fills the soul with hope. Feel Can you sense a stirring? The heart awakens To the breath of life. -Troy J. Hoecherl- © Troy J Hoecherl All Rights Reserved Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Excellent Troy ... we should all Listen, Look, Breathe In, Feel Right after our morning coffee  nicely done Rex}>{{{{o> [This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 04-27-2000).] |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Troy, This is fabulous, and so what I felt this morning, I had been in the dumps but this morning I did rise to greet life with a smile. I thank you for sharing this beautiful poem here with us. |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
This is beautiful! Such little things put together in such a grand way. Thanks for great day brightener. Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Rex - thanks! If you have a pot of coffee on, I like mine with two cream - no sugar.  Lost Dreamer - thank you! I actually wrote this one awhile back, and I posted it now to help me raise my own spirits - I've been a bit depressed, myself. I'm happy that you could relate! WildChild - you are MOST welcome, if I brightened your day! And, thank YOU for brightening MINE with your kind comments! Thank you all for reading and responding! Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Troy, I love this!!! Great writing!!! I am right there with you, my friend.....looking, breathing, feeling, listening. I can feel the hope that tomorrow brings. Thanks Troy, needed this today!!! LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I Like Your poetry alwasy brings a breath of fresh air though |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
You had me with you every step of the way Troy, Listening, looking, breathing but most of all feeling. This is a magnificent piece. Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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hsystems Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 319Murray, UT, USA |
Lone Wolf - thank you, my friend! I'm glad I could brighten your day...that's what friends are for, after all! Hoot - thanks so much for your gracious comments! Most of my poetry IS upbeat...although I have written a few mournful ones (you should see "Death, Be Swift" in Dark, for example, LOL!) Butterflies - I appreciate your kind words! When I first joined Passions, the first poem that I read was one of yours - and you are still one of my favorites! Thank you all again for your gentle words! Troy Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi hsystems, This is wonderful, you have given me a fresh way to look at the day, thank you. Cerenity |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Troy, Very good enjoyed the read. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is pretty! |
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