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brandondinsmore
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0 posted 2000-04-27 09:29 AM


october's juniper has
fallen, measured, down to me,
a swirl's trajectory; dismally
i stared, and conspired with
the blanketing ground.
to interject, and be-snatch you...
i see a swimming; composing
swift waves; doppleganger.
burning trees around
alter-egos seeking shaded
congruency.
fau.  strike a mistake.

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brandondinsmore
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1 posted 2000-04-27 09:43 AM


how do you speel 'fau'?  is that right?  i'm trying for the word for fake.
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2 posted 2000-04-27 10:01 AM


spelled "faux" as in "faux pas"; a social blunder; error in etiquette; tactless act or remark.  [Pronounced "fo"]
brandondinsmore
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3 posted 2000-04-27 03:17 PM


duly noted.  how is the rest of the poem though?
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