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tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
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Australia

0 posted 2000-04-27 03:55 AM


YOU
Evoke fire in me
Igniting the flame of my heart

YOU
Evoke power in me
Forcing electricity to spark

YOU
Evoke wonder in me
Tempting delight to unfold

YOU
Evoke tenderness in me
Allowing love to behold

YOU
Evoke my whole being to melt at the sight of you and awaken at your very touch

YOU
Evoke all this in me with your voice I long to hear so much

Until the next time you EVOKE all this in me

I

U



 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


© Copyright 2000 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
1 posted 2000-04-27 05:32 AM


Tracie,

Sparking the electric flame with temptations for hearing a tender voice, soothing pleasure, evoking the realm of being in love....

great words!

Sudhir
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 Take each day as it comes,
Consider each day as a flight,
Try hard to succeed and fly,
Surely then you will reach some height.

But if by some chance you don’t,
Remember that tomorrow will always come.
Learn this well and learn this hard
That today’s efforts will pay for tomorrow’s fun.

A Crazy Monster, a.k.a Ski


[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 04-27-2000).]

Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
2 posted 2000-04-27 10:09 AM


Tracie, this poem is really nice.  It's unique in wording and design.  I'm surprised this has not received more responses.  Back to the top it goes where it belongs.
dh

Severn & Dark Angel
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 4

3 posted 2000-04-27 10:32 AM


hey Sparky, great poem girl, loved it!  
Lost Dreamer
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Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
4 posted 2000-04-27 10:38 AM


tracie, I love the way you designed this poem and the message is beautiful.  
tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
5 posted 2000-04-28 07:38 AM


Sudhir~
Thank you i loved your reply...Special  
Tracie~

Danny~
Thank you my sweet freind   treasured
Tracie~

S&D
Thanks for taking the time to read and give such an electrifying response  
Tracie~

LD~
So glad you liked it... thanks  
Tracie~


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
6 posted 2000-04-28 07:45 AM


Clever Poem --Tracie -- you evoke
me to await for more --)

netswan

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2000-04-28 07:51 AM


Tracie~
You're pretty special yourself, gal.
Enjoyed the presentation.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
8 posted 2000-04-29 05:17 AM


netswan~
Your replies are always so encouraging
Thanks
Tracie~

Marge

Tracie~


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

9 posted 2000-04-29 06:38 AM


Tracie,this is excellent...
perfect presentation,
and very well expresssed emotions...
someone has "evoked" much inspiration in you.
very nice work here!!!
take care, jm


 Is it too much to find an answer,
Is it too much to hold you close.
Is it too much to find a reason,
Is it too much to free my soul --
From self control ...
And I know you're always waiting for me ...
You take me far away,
And I know you're holding me ...
And it's better now ...
~vertical horizon~



Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
10 posted 2000-04-29 06:58 AM


You evoked awesome feeling in the poem traci, twas a beautiful sight   and Love like this is magnificent, I'm so glad that you have someone in your live that evokes a reason to share the gift that you have within you.  Thank you for sharing this.

 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.


tincan5
Junior Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 33

11 posted 2000-04-29 08:31 PM


What a wonderful poem, I enjoyed it very much!    
tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
12 posted 2000-05-05 11:34 PM


Janet Marie~
Always there with inspiring words of praise. I thank you very much and you take care now  
Tracie~

Butterflies~
So glad to have evoked such feelings you felt upon reading this  
Tracie~

Tincan~
So glad you enjoyed the read  
thanks
Tracie~
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 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe




[This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 05-05-2000).]

Tia
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since 2000-05-05
Posts 41
massachusetts
13 posted 2000-05-06 02:51 PM


that was a very nice poem....it was well done.hope to see some more.

Tia

 I'd rather have someone hate me for who i am,than to have someone like me for who i'm pretending to be

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
14 posted 2000-05-10 08:33 AM


Dear Tia
I nearly forgot to post a reply back to you been away   sorry
Well here it is: so glad you read it and I thank you for your lovely reply.
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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