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tracie66
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since 01-18-2000
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Victoria, Australia


0 posted 04-27-2000 03:55 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

YOU
Evoke fire in me
Igniting the flame of my heart

YOU
Evoke power in me
Forcing electricity to spark

YOU
Evoke wonder in me
Tempting delight to unfold

YOU
Evoke tenderness in me
Allowing love to behold

YOU
Evoke my whole being to melt at the sight of you and awaken at your very touch

YOU
Evoke all this in me with your voice I long to hear so much

Until the next time you EVOKE all this in me

I

U



 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

© Copyright 2000 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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since 04-26-2000
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1 posted 04-27-2000 05:32 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Tracie,

Sparking the electric flame with temptations for hearing a tender voice, soothing pleasure, evoking the realm of being in love....

great words!

Sudhir


 Take each day as it comes,
Consider each day as a flight,
Try hard to succeed and fly,
Surely then you will reach some height.

But if by some chance you don’t,
Remember that tomorrow will always come.
Learn this well and learn this hard
That today’s efforts will pay for tomorrow’s fun.

A Crazy Monster, a.k.a Ski


[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 04-27-2000).]
Danny Holloway
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2 posted 04-27-2000 10:09 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Tracie, this poem is really nice.  It's unique in wording and design.  I'm surprised this has not received more responses.  Back to the top it goes where it belongs.
dh
Severn & Dark Angel
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3 posted 04-27-2000 10:32 AM       View Profile for Severn & Dark Angel   Email Severn & Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn & Dark Angel

hey Sparky, great poem girl, loved it!  
Lost Dreamer
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4 posted 04-27-2000 10:38 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

tracie, I love the way you designed this poem and the message is beautiful.  
tracie66
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5 posted 04-28-2000 07:38 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Sudhir~
Thank you i loved your reply...Special  
Tracie~

Danny~
Thank you my sweet freind   treasured
Tracie~

S&D
Thanks for taking the time to read and give such an electrifying response  
Tracie~

LD~
So glad you liked it... thanks  
Tracie~


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

netswan
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6 posted 04-28-2000 07:45 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Clever Poem --Tracie -- you evoke
me to await for more --)

netswan
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 04-28-2000 07:51 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Tracie~
You're pretty special yourself, gal.
Enjoyed the presentation.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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tracie66
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8 posted 04-29-2000 05:17 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

netswan~
Your replies are always so encouraging
Thanks
Tracie~

Marge

Tracie~


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

Janet Marie
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since 01-22-2000
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9 posted 04-29-2000 06:38 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Tracie,this is excellent...
perfect presentation,
and very well expresssed emotions...
someone has "evoked" much inspiration in you.
very nice work here!!!
take care, jm


 Is it too much to find an answer,
Is it too much to hold you close.
Is it too much to find a reason,
Is it too much to free my soul --
From self control ...
And I know you're always waiting for me ...
You take me far away,
And I know you're holding me ...
And it's better now ...
~vertical horizon~


Butterflies_dont_cry
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10 posted 04-29-2000 06:58 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

You evoked awesome feeling in the poem traci, twas a beautiful sight   and Love like this is magnificent, I'm so glad that you have someone in your live that evokes a reason to share the gift that you have within you.  Thank you for sharing this.

 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.

tincan5
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11 posted 04-29-2000 08:31 PM       View Profile for tincan5   Email tincan5   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tincan5

What a wonderful poem, I enjoyed it very much!    
tracie66
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12 posted 05-05-2000 11:34 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Janet Marie~
Always there with inspiring words of praise. I thank you very much and you take care now  
Tracie~

Butterflies~
So glad to have evoked such feelings you felt upon reading this  
Tracie~

Tincan~
So glad you enjoyed the read  
thanks
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe




[This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 05-05-2000).]
Tia
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13 posted 05-06-2000 02:51 PM       View Profile for Tia   Email Tia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tia

that was a very nice poem....it was well done.hope to see some more.

Tia

 I'd rather have someone hate me for who i am,than to have someone like me for who i'm pretending to be
tracie66
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14 posted 05-10-2000 08:33 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Dear Tia
I nearly forgot to post a reply back to you been away   sorry
Well here it is: so glad you read it and I thank you for your lovely reply.
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


 
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