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Open Poetry #7

Lasting a lifetime....

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-04-27 02:29 AM

however brief the moment
it can last a lifetime
if you only let it shine
in hope..i can dream
and pretend everythings mine
skip stones in the water
forget who i am..and get lost
in the tides of time..
with the silence of many
their beacon..their burden
leaving me
to immerse myself in plenty..of pity

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

1 posted 2000-04-27 05:10 PM

"however brief the moment
It can last a lifetime"

I like that.

Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-04-27 10:16 PM

in hope..i can dream
and pretend everythings mine
skip stones in the water
forget who i am..and get lost
in the tides of time..
----------------
perfect.
you are so good at this.(smile)
love the depth of this piece.
and the emotions.
perfect.
take care, jm

Is it too much to find an answer,
Is it too much to hold you close.
Is it too much to find a reason,
Is it too much to free my soul --
From self control ...
And I know you're always waiting for me ...
You take me far away,
And I know you're holding me ...
And it's better now ...
~vertical horizon~

netswan
Senior Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 1369
Washington

3 posted 2000-04-27 11:20 PM

Enjoyed this. This piece makes one
think.

netswan

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