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The Evil Inside

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desperado
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0 posted 04-27-2000 01:33 AM       View Profile for desperado   Email desperado   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for desperado


twisted sideways and torn inside out
blackend highways and maps made of doubt
ripped from the socket by lonesome dispair
out of control; no chance of repair
burning desires carefully known
nothing inspires the love you have shown
clinging on the wall you wished destroyed
burned by the fire you once had enjoyed
never saw the shadows you just had to make
never heard the echos of the hearts you did break
blind to the tears that silently fell
trapped inside your loving hell
I wish you could hear the screams you have caused
for once in your life that heart might have paused
and all of the pain you made would be clear
as your eyes would make it's own poisonous tear
a tear of cyanide to roll down your face
lonely and unforgiving to put you in your place
so swallow your tear and save your dead soul
for only the death of your evil will make you whole


 shine a light so bright that all can see
and you will find the joys that echo within me

© Copyright 2000 James Webster - All Rights Reserved
Jeffrey Carter
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1 posted 04-27-2000 01:37 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

WOW!!!
This is powerful yet sad and dark. It brings to mind one word "Heartbreak"

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep
bobbycat
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2 posted 04-27-2000 02:12 AM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

Ouch....I can just feel the pain from this one.  Very emotional, very well written.  

Bobbycat =^..^=


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Michael
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3 posted 04-27-2000 02:28 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Deep thoughts here, James.  I love it when you get philosophical on me.  Glad to see ya back - you've been missed.


Michael
tracie66
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4 posted 04-27-2000 04:05 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

This is sooo deep and dark, alot of emotion vented. I loved it  
Tracie~


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Anne Rooks

doreen peri
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5 posted 04-30-2000 02:30 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

wickedly haunting, many levels of meaning... lots of great lines in here

i especially thought the last two lines were very effective.
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ouch...damn
 
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