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I Know You Wont Forgive Me

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Echo Rhayne
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0 posted 04-27-2000 01:06 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Echo Rhayne

I know you wont forgive me
so I wont even ask
I'll just slip out quietly
and put back on my mask

I didn't want to do it
but I did it anyway
and I know you wont forgive me
so I'll be on my way


 I'm not waving, I'm drowning!




[This message has been edited by Echo Rhayne (edited 04-27-2000).]
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Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 04-27-2000 01:14 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Hi, sweetheart,
This has a timid sweetness to it, although I think all can be forgiven.
Love you
Liz
Jeffrey Carter
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2 posted 04-27-2000 01:28 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Echo Rayne,
All things can be forgiven. Sometimes we all make mistakes. As timid as this piece is it is still beaytifully written.

All my love,
Jeffrey
Dennis L. White
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3 posted 04-27-2000 06:57 AM       View Profile for Dennis L. White   Email Dennis L. White   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dennis L. White

Dear Echo,
  I won't presume to know whats been done but I hear a cry for help, timid as it may be your plea is heard, Don't Give Up! Your poem in Spiritual Journeys lead me here to let you know that God Loves You and cares about You.
Your HELP is here if you only allow it!
Peace unto you my Sister, Dennis
ellie LeJeune
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4 posted 04-27-2000 08:09 AM       View Profile for ellie LeJeune   Email ellie LeJeune   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ellie LeJeune

Dear Echo; I have a small question for you. If all the universe and all the beauty of this world was created by God and He is that immense and that all powerful, why then would your sin be so much greater that He can't forgive you? Your sin is nothing, only a small speck in comparison to His immense Mercy and tremendous Love that He has for you. Think about it this way...What have you got to loose if you just ask Him for His forgiveness and see what happens? We all care about you here andI willkeep you in my prayers and in my heart this day.
One last thought. I am the mother of six children. They have made some bad choices, on occasion, but I love them so much, that I often tell them that there is nothing they can do to make me stop loving them. Now, imagine how much greater is His Love for you! I'm available by e-mail if you need to talk. Love, Ellie

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5 posted 04-27-2000 08:24 AM       View Profile for BSC   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BSC

Echo - I saw your post in Spiritual Journeys and came to read this.  Trust me kiddo, I've worn the mask, and I have felt that I just couldn't take anymore....I have felt so very unworthy, put out, angry, hurt.....the whole spectrum.... Eventually, when I had to look up to see the bottom, I gave it all to Him... and, He took it.  He's there for you, you need only hand it over.  Whatever it is that has you spiraling downward can soon be a distant memory -- if you give it to Him.  Just hold on Echo, tomorrow is another day, and all can be forgiven.  God Bless, Bonnie

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WhtDove
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6 posted 04-27-2000 09:48 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Melanie, what's up?? Talk to me girl! You know this isn't the way out! Sweetie I know life is rough, Melanie, God does not leave you HON!!

You email me ya hear????
Poet deVine
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7 posted 04-27-2000 09:53 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

What are you trying to say?

[This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 04-27-2000).]
Sunshine
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8 posted 04-27-2000 10:10 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

"Nay, child, you not need even ask,
but lift from your eyes and face this mask;
for although you "did it" anyway,
you're forgiven now, and every day.

You are my child, you are my love,
peace be with you on the wings of the dove."
Lost Dreamer
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9 posted 04-27-2000 11:11 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Melanie, You need not hide, forgiveness is in your heart it's always there waiting for you to use it when needed. We all need too forgive ourselves at times for none of us are perfect. We all have flaws and we all make mistakes and at those times we are our own worst enemies. I know I just came from there punishing myself to no end for not thinking and just acting. This morning I came to realize I had to forgive myself before I could help anyone else forgive me. I had that forgiveness waiting right there for me to use all along I was just too blind to see it. Please Melanie take a minute and look for it within yourself and know you have the power too receive forgiveness as well as give it.
{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{Hugs}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}
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10 posted 04-27-2000 12:19 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

I have to agree with the earlier posts and say that our God is such a loving God that He will forgive you of whatever you have done. But you must remember to forgive others the way He has forgiven you. Sorry to preach to you, but I think that many people forget the second part of that statement. Great job on the poem.

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
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11 posted 05-13-2004 03:24 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

yeah...sigh
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