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I Love You

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David2
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0 posted 04-26-2000 10:56 PM       View Profile for David2   Email David2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for David2

I love you

To share a meal for two by candlelight
And simple soothing celtic melodies
One calm and peaceful, quiet Summer's night
Provides these nearly perfect remedies.
The secrets of our love laid bare at last
Sensations ever hidden now exposed,
We love as perfect lovers, hard and fast
As intimate as ever we supposed.
And then her silken cheek against my breast
We nestle warm and sheltered in our bed.
Our legs entangled sweetly as we rest
Contented in the joy our hearts have bred.

As in the morrow's light I feel her near,
I cherish her with feelings most severe.
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© Copyright 2000 David William La Belle - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 04-26-2000 11:15 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

OH MAN...*SIGH*

wow..you get me everytime with these...
you write devotion divinely...
love your sonnets...
and btw...I've been doing some sonnet research,
in hopes of writing one of these gems...
and I printed out your
"My Eyes"...
it still gets to me everytime I read it...
one of the best poems ever...
just wanted to tell ya that...(smile)
take care, jm


 Is it too much to find an answer,
Is it too much to hold you close.
Is it too much to find a reason,
Is it too much to free my soul --
From self control ...
And I know you're always waiting for me ...
You take me far away,
And I know you're holding me ...
And it's better now ...
~vertical horizon~


David2
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2 posted 04-26-2000 11:19 PM       View Profile for David2   Email David2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for David2

Thanks Janet,
   I do appreciate yourr responses. It is nice to know these bring joy at times.
          David2
Meadowmuse
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3 posted 04-27-2000 01:27 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Intoxicating, your words here...so lovely, so right. Thank you for this sensual, heart~filling gift of poetry, David.

~ Claire

 Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau
Jeffrey Carter
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State of constant confusion!


4 posted 04-27-2000 01:31 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

This is superb my friend. Wish I could write sonnets this well.

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


5 posted 04-27-2000 07:35 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

What an inspiration,
A true romantic find,
This poem I have read,
Is truely one of a kind!!

So Romantic David!!

I love romantic love sonnets! Beautiful!!!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 04-27-2000 07:44 AM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

Beautiful writing David (as always)  

Roniece


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Joannak
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7 posted 04-27-2000 07:56 AM       View Profile for Joannak   Email Joannak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joannak

David, just beautiful.  This was so perfectly expressed, I really love your writing.

Joanna


 What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write?   Ray Bradbury




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Martie
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8 posted 04-27-2000 02:27 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

David, your poetry makes me so sigh-filled with its soft and sensual loving words.  Beautiful writing, sir!
Parker
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9 posted 04-27-2000 02:57 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

David, this is wonderful stuff, you are gifted in the sonnet I dare say.

Parker
Corinne
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10 posted 04-27-2000 03:27 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Intensely romantic, David.

corinne
netswan
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11 posted 04-27-2000 04:09 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

David2 ------Whoa ------this was good.

netswan
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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12 posted 04-27-2000 05:55 PM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

Naturally, the title caught me, but the poem took me gently into my own thoughts and that was a beautiful place to bring me with your lovely words.  Thank you!
Denise
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13 posted 04-28-2000 09:23 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Lovely sonnet, David! Very lovely!

Denise
Irish Rose
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14 posted 04-28-2000 09:54 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

this was fiery and passionate and
loving....wonderful piece

 Kathleen

Nan
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15 posted 05-01-2000 07:33 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

It's just wonderful to find a well written and finely crafted sonnet, on an age old theme, with a fresh delivery, by an intensely romantic man... This is great, David...
passing shadows
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16 posted 05-02-2004 09:13 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

sweet
 
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