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A Most Beautiful Soul

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tincan5
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0 posted 04-26-2000 08:59 PM       View Profile for tincan5   Email tincan5   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tincan5


A Most Beautiful Soul

Here I stand and gaze upon a celestial sight
And remember the grace bestowed upon me one night
For heaven opened her arms to show me love  
And sent an angel to me upon the wings of a dove

What a beautiful soul I met that springtime day
One who touches my heart in a most special way
And who has shown to me that you don’t have to dream
To know that kindness and compassion still reign supreme

From “quaters” to “bubblers” to “squiggly cheese”
Our thoughts ride together upon a celestial breeze
And I know in my soul as I drift off to sleep
Thoughts of that angel from heaven I always keep

Each night I dream about a rainbow’s slide
Her hand in mine as we begin our ride
To a place where our souls are never apart
And where beauty and love overflow in our hearts

So to all the souls who read this poem I write
Who search for love but are still alone at night
Have faith and believe in all your prayers
For an angel from heaven you too can share!


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Balladeer
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1 posted 04-26-2000 10:47 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Personally, I've never met anyone I could share squiggly cheese with but I admire anyone who has. The warmth and feeling you have displayed here makes this a good poem, tincan.
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


2 posted 04-27-2000 08:15 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

I agree with Balladeer,
Your poem was beautiful!and Romantic!!
Parker
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... the old black rum


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Yes a very beautiful poem, so lovely.

parker
Danny Holloway
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4 posted 04-27-2000 10:15 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

~~~nice writing tincan5~~~~~~
tincan5
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5 posted 04-29-2000 06:12 PM       View Profile for tincan5   Email tincan5   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tincan5

Thank you for taking the time to comment  
tracie66
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Tincan~
Your a hopeless romantic aren't you   this was soo lovely and I loved the ride on the rainbow's slide.
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Kellsue
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7 posted 05-07-2000 07:48 PM       View Profile for Kellsue   Email Kellsue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kellsue

The person whom you wrote this poem for must be the luckiest person in the world to have someone write them something so touching, so loving and something that bares your soul to them.  You are a wonderful writer with a heart of gold, please post more!!!

~Kellsue
  



 Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens

We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill




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