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insect
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0 posted 2000-04-26 07:28 PM


Drunken Fool

Just one more drink then we can leave
Honey you’re a goddess, I do believe
Help me get up after this drink
And slow down this room it's hard to think
Thanks for asking, I'd love to dance
But as you can see I pissed my pants
Hey wait for me I'm not that drunk
I've got a change of clothes in my trunk
Ah don't worry, I can drive
All these years and I'm still alive
Same to you baby, your not so cool
What do you take me for, a drunken fool

04/24/2000



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doreen peri
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1 posted 2000-04-26 08:40 PM


I laughed when i read this, but I know it's not funny.... very poignant in an angry, bitter, yet humorous way. Thanks for posting.
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2 posted 2000-04-26 10:21 PM


Hi, Insect, I agree with Doreen. This funny in a way,yet in another it is kinda sad.

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

Parker
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3 posted 2000-04-27 02:52 PM


ain't no fool like a drunken fool,
funny and very meaningfull.


Parker

insect
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4 posted 2000-04-29 12:21 PM


doreen peri, it is meant to be humorous but any other thoughts are fine too.

Jeffery Carter, hi and sad is OK, some of us have been there as well, during a binge or two.

Haleyja, you ain't fooling.

Thank you all for responding and watch for the fool, I don't think it's last call.


netswan
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5 posted 2000-04-30 05:47 AM


LOL Insect, this is cute and clever,
but the subject is sad -- It does
the heart good though to be able
to stop and see the humor in life.

Thanks for sharing

netswan

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6 posted 2000-04-30 12:16 PM


***insect,
welcometo passions.
this is a great poem.
funny or not, i really enjoed it.
    
i'll be looking out for your work from now on.


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.



Parker
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7 posted 2000-05-11 10:34 AM


Well couldn't let this disappear just yet, mr bug. A very funny strong message.


insect
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8 posted 2000-05-12 01:22 AM


netswan…Sorry for the delayed response to your response so I'd like to respond
                   because I'm responsible for responding to your response. Umm thanks!

***mete out…Greatly appreciated. I enjoyed drinking your reply.
                         Thank you.

Haleyja…Thanks for bringing me up…I mean throwing me up to the …I mean puking……PUTTING MY
                  Poem to the top again…. I knew I shouldn't have had that last drink…blaaaahh!!!
                  Just kidding!!     Hey! Can you tall me a caxi!!  Anks athot!

Tank you all for Thresponding.


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9 posted 2000-05-12 02:09 AM


Insect~ I started laughing, then thought maybe I shouldn't be, then I read it was supposed to be funny. Whew!   This is great! -SEA
insect
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10 posted 2000-05-12 02:27 AM


SEA…I think I'll have another one!
poetFemmeFatale
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11 posted 2000-05-12 11:43 AM


This guy should consider wearing a Depends the next time he goes out!  How embarrassing!  LOL  One has to be REAL drunk to wet down his leg!  ROFLMAO  but yes, tis sad!  Thanks for another funny, there Mr. Bug!  
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12 posted 2000-05-12 08:38 PM


While I have not done anything as embrassing as that I had made a mild fool of myself once or twice while under the influence, well I am student so it has to be expected. love the black humour, great poem. I really liked that one.... did I ever tell ywah that yus were my bezt friendz...I am..hic..notz drunk..or anysthinz.
  

insect
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13 posted 2000-05-13 06:44 PM


poetFemmeFatale…Or take a back pack of clothes to the bar
                                  Instead of the car ha! ha! oops!    PML  

brian madden…Hey friend don't pass out ….it looks like your catching  some Zzzz 's
                          Here have a double!!

SEA…You are a great sea…I mean thank you greatly!   PML opps! Not again!

Spank you all for responding              
  (Pissed Myself Laughing)



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14 posted 2000-05-13 06:50 PM


~HeeHee,....Good one!!!  
insect
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15 posted 2000-05-14 01:58 AM


SpitFire…Nice name. I'll drink to that! Not many poets in
                 here have a plain name. Ha! Ha! That didn't just
                 fly over your head. He! He! LOL

Thanks for refilling

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16 posted 2000-06-26 12:48 PM


LOL  I can't stop laughing....the poem was
great and the replies even greater...Keep up the great work!!
:0)

insect
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17 posted 2000-06-28 05:29 PM


AmaZing…Thankz alozzz! Zzzzzzzzzzzz
                    zzzzzzzSnort!zzzzzzzzzzzz
                    zzzzzzzSnort!zzzzzzz……….

                    Zzzzhack!!ahumm!WOW!
                    What time is it? WHAT!!!
                    6:00am OHH! My pounding
                    head! I'm never drinking again!
                    ASPRIN!!!ASPRIN!!!

Help me! And what happened to my pants!

insect
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18 posted 2000-08-13 11:03 PM


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insect
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19 posted 2000-08-13 11:36 PM


My quik view didn't show every part of my rainbow poem so i had to use this window to get it right because it took to much work to do so i wanted it to turn out right sorry to us up this space but it really helped me. I am just new with this computer but still learning

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insect
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20 posted 2000-10-09 08:40 PM


Sorry just a test for Prince of Poetry
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insect
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21 posted 2000-11-05 11:18 PM


Deleted sorry!

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kat
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22 posted 2000-11-12 02:59 PM


Yeah yeah..sure you're sorry for deleting so many times.  Just admit it! You wanted this on the top again and again and again and that's the only reason why you did. Didn't you?..DIDN'T YOU???(kidding!)LMAO!
Actually this is the first time I've read this and it's halarious! No wonder it was so easy for you to be the drunk in my "It's You" poem.LOL
Had a good laugh! Thanks!
  

kat

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insect
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23 posted 2000-11-12 03:06 PM


Thanks kat did you get any vanilla ice cream lately!!?
kat
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24 posted 2000-11-12 03:27 PM


Hmmmmmmmmm...did you do something to my ice cream poem??  I better go check! LOL

insect
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25 posted 2000-11-12 03:40 PM


No but you'll see
Oh loved that poem very much
It was delicious




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insect
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26 posted 2000-11-27 12:00 PM


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insect
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27 posted 2001-02-22 09:26 PM


Sorry just a test
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insect
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28 posted 2001-02-23 11:54 PM


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Love Police
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29 posted 2001-03-02 12:27 PM


test
insect
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30 posted 2001-04-22 12:20 PM


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insect
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31 posted 2003-04-29 09:07 PM


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...just testing something....sorry!

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