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vandana
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0 posted 2000-04-26 06:25 PM



Don't you see
how far we're?
I don't 've your arms around me,
There's no harm in love,
So come to me,
Iam remembering you a lot,
Even though we're miles apart,
you'll be in my heart,
Don't you realise
how long it has been,
I haven't seen you long time,
I'm longing for you,
Don't  you ever remember me
whenever you are?
Can't you see me through your heart
I remember you,
Even though
we're miles apart,
Do you ever remember those times
when we wete together?
I wonder
If you do,
But I do remember you,
Even though we're miles apart


[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 04-26-2000).]

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2000-04-26 06:41 PM


"There's no harm in Love."
"I'm remembering you a lot."
Its so nice to be in Love...hope your special day will come soon when he is back in your arms.  James

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
2 posted 2000-04-27 06:16 AM


Two souls, apart and distant
Two hearts, beating together,
Miles away though one is from another,
Feelings flutter always for the other

Excellent depiction Vandana,

Regards,
Sudhir

 Take each day as it comes,
Consider each day as a flight,
Try hard to succeed and fly,
Surely then you will reach some height.

But if by some chance you don’t,
Remember that tomorrow will always come.
Learn this well and learn this hard
That today’s efforts will pay for tomorrow’s fun.

A Crazy Monster, a.k.a Ski

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-05-13 03:36 AM


sad but pretty
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