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ghirgag
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 11


0 posted 2000-04-26 12:35 PM


There is an old Italian legend…

“It was a sunny day
And there was something new
In the air.
Mother snake was giving birth
To her seventh son.
He was the oldest of the nest.
She was licking him
When, suddenly
The asp bit to the mother to death”.

Much later
Another son, man
Bit his mother, “Nature”, to death.

She gave him life
She nurtured and loved him.
But he, ungratefully like the asp
Poisoned air, water, and ground.

Whilst she was dying
She even looked at him with love.

Oh, poor man!
Don’t you realize that
You have bitten yourself?


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winterinblue
Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 32

1 posted 2000-04-29 03:45 AM


This is a very clever allegory, and I loved every line.  I didn't see this poem, until I saw your poem "Revenge", and went looking for your other work.  What words these are: "Don’t you realize that You have bitten yourself?"!!!
The story of human-kind.  Much more cruel than the asp.

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