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ghirgag
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since 2000-04-26
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0 posted 2000-04-26 12:31 PM


We’re never satisfied
with what we have.
Craving something new
contents us
for only minutes.
Then, we are always looking
for new emotions.
But someone needs
“ Just water”



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Cerenity
Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
1 posted 2000-04-26 09:53 PM


Hi ghirgag,

This is good really gets the point across, thank you for sharing it.
Welcome to passions,

Cerenity

7
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 113
Amherst, MA, USA
2 posted 2000-04-26 10:32 PM


wow...

no words to describe the intelligence and accuracy of this poem. truly one of the best i've ever read.

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