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Dream On Dreamy Dreams!

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Sudhir Iyer
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0 posted 04-26-2000 11:05 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sudhir Iyer


Dreamy eyes, from the Nile
Lips spouting, beautiful smile,
O my lady, my dear Kyle,
Love's blooming deep inside.

As I sigh, a feeling so deep,
Your being away makes me weep,
Without your dream, I cannot sleep,
Your face takes me in a sweep.

Dreamy eyes, from the Nile,
Lips spouting, beautiful smile,
O my lady, my dear Kyle,
Love's blooming deep inside.

Close my eyes, feeling you,
Sensing your touch,
Kissing softly, quivering lips,
Feeling blessed ever so much.

Darling Angel, from the Nile,
Cheeks flushing, lovely blue eyes,
O my queen, my dear from the Nile,
Love blooming, so beautiful - your smile.

Caress your hair, trembling ever so,
Taking a deep breath,
Moving so quietly, slow steps,
Feeling nervous, all too much.

Darling Angel, from the Nile,
Cheeks flushing, lovely blue eyes,
O my queen, my dear from the Nile,
Love blooming, so beautiful - your smile.

Slipping my hands, entwined in yours,
Abundance of nervous energy,
Passion filled heart, rapid beats,
As I fell off my couch, there ends a dream.

----meant to be a song from the heart, ended up as a poetry from the soul---

© Copyright 2000 Sudhir Iyer - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 04-26-2000 11:31 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Sudhir~
This one is soft and lilting.
Nice thoughts.
~*Marge*~


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Denise
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2 posted 04-26-2000 11:58 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautiful poetry of the soul!

Denise
mariee66
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3 posted 04-26-2000 02:13 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Nicely written piece from your soul~
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard


Sudhir Iyer
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4 posted 04-30-2000 08:45 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Marge, Denise and Marie,
Thanks from the bottom of my heart for your comments.

regards - sudhir
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5 posted 06-03-2000 03:34 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Did you really fall off the couch!!!LOL...

too cute...

 Sunshine

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Helen Keller ~~~

Lorraine Nisbet
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Hi, Sudhir!

Nicely written.  Well did you really fall off the couch?

~Lorraine

 
A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur

tracie66
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7 posted 06-03-2000 08:27 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Sudhir~
My friend this was breathtaking and oh so dreamy.
and I want to know to...did you fall off your couch??? (ouch)  
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Janet Marie
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8 posted 06-03-2000 10:33 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

poem or song...works either way for me...
and either way is delightful
wonderful rhyme in this Sud...
you write very well ...
for someone who just fell  

later-poet-gator
jm

 There are places inside our souls ...
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts ...
that need to be loved this much.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

Sudhir Iyer
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9 posted 06-05-2000 02:53 PM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Karilea, Lorraine, Tracie, Janet,
Thanks for reading and posting your wonderful replies.

Ouch that hurt, I did fall off from my dream couch....

Thanks once again...

Regards, sudhir
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Ah...but a dream to stay in and never awaken from...here's hoping all your dreams come true  
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11 posted 06-05-2000 08:06 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Sudhir,...this here poem felt so light and airy while I was reading it.  Wonderful writing.  Thank you for sharing. *Peace.
Sudhir Iyer
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Ruth,
Thanks for reading and posting. More thanks for the wishes that you send with your wonderful response...

Spitfire,
Thank You for reading.

regards, sudhir
Kit McCallum
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It's a pleasure to share your softly woven dream Sudhir, even if you did wake me up rather abruptly at the end (LOL) ... lovely work!

Best wishes,
/Kit
Sudhir Iyer
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14 posted 06-07-2000 12:02 PM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Kit, thanks a lot to you, sorry for the abrupt wake-up call, though  

Many regards, sudhir
 
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