How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #7 Archive
 ***nightingale
 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

***nightingale

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
mete out
Member
since 02-16-2000
Posts 273
england


0 posted 04-26-2000 10:52 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for mete out

what happened to you out there?
they really hurt you didn't they?

i need to see you cry so i can mother you.
i need to see you bleed so i can smother you.

you really got burned, didn't you?
your fingers crudly bandaged.

come. lay down beside me.
i'll take you away.

when you wounds have healed
and your soul returned,
we will run.

run to places we have only ever dreamed about before

we will run
together.



 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.




[This message has been edited by mete out (edited 05-11-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Louise Parsons - All Rights Reserved
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 08-22-99
Posts 23002


1 posted 04-26-2000 12:05 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Together....it doesn't get any better than that! Very lovely poem.

Denise
Sudhir Iyer
Member Rara Avis
since 04-26-2000
Posts 7206
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium


2 posted 04-26-2000 02:31 PM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Nice soul-stirring punch word...

regards from a soul-seeker,
sudhir.

 Take each day as it comes,
Consider each day as a flight,
Try hard to succeed and fly,
Surely then you will reach some height.

But if by some chance you don’t,
Remember that tomorrow will always come.
Learn this well and learn this hard
That today’s efforts will pay for tomorrow’s fun.

A Crazy Monster, a.k.a Ski
infinat3 sadn3ss
Member
since 02-14-2000
Posts 86
somerset england


3 posted 04-26-2000 04:36 PM       View Profile for infinat3 sadn3ss   Email infinat3 sadn3ss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for infinat3 sadn3ss

hiya,

i am so happy you feel so much together ,

ive read this and told you why i like it before so i cant think of anything to say

sorry i probably excited you by making you think it was a decent reply

see you soon

love always
cabes
mete out
Member
since 02-16-2000
Posts 273
england


4 posted 04-30-2000 08:05 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***dsnyder,
thankyou.
you are right, it's the best!

***Sudhir Iyer,
your words are greatfully received.
thankyou.

***cabes,
thankyou so much sweetheart.
your replies are always so looked forward to by me.
you daft thing.
i love you cabey!
we all do!
don't sell yourself short honey.
lou  xxx


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


Thinker
New Member
since 03-06-2000
Posts 8


5 posted 05-03-2000 09:44 AM       View Profile for Thinker   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Thinker

This is beautiful baby..
Ill take away all your fear baby.. you can
just huddle up in me anytime..
Ill always be here for you just like your here for me. I love you with all my heart.
Your going to do just fine in life, infact your gonna do great.
You are truely amazing and every day you prove that.
Dont you worry about anything anymore because as long as were together nothing can touch us.


Yer baby!
************
THe THinkEr

 To think is a right
To know is to be too sure of your own exsistance
PericolosoAmore
Junior Member
since 04-14-2000
Posts 31


6 posted 05-03-2000 04:15 PM       View Profile for PericolosoAmore   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PericolosoAmore

Lovely poem,
togetherness is a wonderful fealing.
mete out
Member
since 02-16-2000
Posts 273
england


7 posted 05-05-2000 06:58 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***Babee,
i don't know where you came from, but i love you so much!
thankyou os much for all your words and kindness and for sharing your wosdom with me.
all my love, booboo   xxx

***PericolosoAmore,
thankyou for your reply,
you are right, i am very lucky.    


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


mete out
Member
since 02-16-2000
Posts 273
england


8 posted 05-05-2000 06:59 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***Babee,
i don't know where you came from, but i love you so much!
thankyou os much for all your words and kindness and for sharing your wosdom with me.
all my love, booboo   xxx

***PericolosoAmore,
thankyou for your reply,
you are right, i am very lucky.    


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


mete out
Member
since 02-16-2000
Posts 273
england


9 posted 05-09-2000 08:03 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

could anyone suggest a title?
i feel it needs one...


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


infinat3 sadn3ss
Member
since 02-14-2000
Posts 86
somerset england


10 posted 05-10-2000 03:18 PM       View Profile for infinat3 sadn3ss   Email infinat3 sadn3ss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for infinat3 sadn3ss

how about "nightingale" or "plaster caster" ???????

 freedom is the right to say 2 + 2 = 4
ESP
Member Elite
since 01-25-2000
Posts 2574
Floating gently on a cloud....


11 posted 05-10-2000 05:42 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Together is a lovely word to end a lovely poem!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
mete out
Member
since 02-16-2000
Posts 273
england


12 posted 05-11-2000 06:00 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***cabey,
i like nightinggale, really subtle...i'll bear that very much in mind.  

***esp,
thankyou for this, it's nice to know that others can share some of my happiness in this one...


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


mete out
Member
since 02-16-2000
Posts 273
england


13 posted 05-11-2000 10:11 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

this ones for you cabes..
check the title.

thats what you get for being the best mate a girl could ever have!


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 11-16-1999
Posts 31622
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


14 posted 05-12-2000 09:14 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

"When your wounds have healed..and your soul returns..we will run" very lovely thoughts come to my mind as I read this.  Makes me think about the healing that is in a new relationship.  James
rene
Member
since 04-24-2000
Posts 114


15 posted 05-12-2000 09:23 PM       View Profile for rene   Email rene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rene

we will run away
that is one of the best descriptions of love i think there is. you write well
Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite
since 03-06-2000
Posts 3768
Michigan


16 posted 05-12-2000 09:44 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

Mete* I just wanted you to know that I think the title completes this poem perfectly.
mete out will be notified of replies
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #7 >> ***nightingale Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors