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Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London

0 posted 2000-04-26 10:51 AM


Your Big Chance
~~~


You ride the wind
to search within
You catch a wave
deep in your cave
You fire a rocket
from your pocket
~
A becon in the night
shines arrow straight
and rides the wind
within your cave
and lights your podium
~
A deathly quiet
surrounds you
You become the becon
it's your big chance
Tell the world
what you've found
~
if you can put it in words
~
and make it quick
they havn't got all day
~~~


 I'm not ugly!
I'm just visually challenged!




© Copyright 2000 Rex Allen McCoy - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-04-26 10:57 AM


You never seem to have a problem finding the right words, Rex!

Denise

Danny Holloway
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2 posted 2000-04-26 11:00 AM


   I have discovered the meaning of Life
So listen world, to what i am about to tell you
      The meaning of life is ......

Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
3 posted 2000-04-26 12:53 PM


Denise ... I can find em ... they may be right ... they be wrong ... I don't argue ... I just post em

Danny ... you have the podium ... speak clearly into the microphone ... we want to count the ums' and ahs'

mariee66
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Recess, OfYourMind
4 posted 2000-04-26 02:18 PM



Marie~

hsystems
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5 posted 2000-04-26 02:28 PM


Rex - well-written, as always!  I thoroughly enjoyed it.


Troy

 Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry
http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm



Sunshine
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6 posted 2000-04-26 03:03 PM


For some reason [lol here]I get this picture of a 17 year know it all being put on the spot by being asked what he "honestly thinks" and can't come up with his own ideas.  Good job, Rex.
Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
7 posted 2000-04-27 12:15 PM


Marie~ ... lol

Troy ... thankyou

Sunshine ... LOL ... yes ... but then again it's scary what some 17 year olds know and have experienced

tracie66
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8 posted 2000-04-27 05:08 AM


Rex~
As usual a delight, pure delight  
Tracie~


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
9 posted 2000-04-27 08:59 AM


Tracie~ ... I'm delighted to here that

passing shadows
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10 posted 2004-05-13 03:28 AM


well done
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