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brandondinsmore
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0 posted 2000-04-26 09:31 AM


Time
Time is on my side
Yes, time is on my side
The days I like drift slowly enough
For the days I hate to pass by
Cherished days and wretched days
Are what makes up my time.

10/26/99


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Cerenity
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1 posted 2000-04-27 08:52 AM


Hi brandondinsmore,

I like this alot, its a very good way to look at time, very good, enjoyed.

Thank you,  Cerenity

brandondinsmore
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2 posted 2000-04-27 09:19 AM


yes, i was trying to sum up the whole 'i hate mondays; i love fridays' sort of feeling.  PLUS the fact that some days are just more beautiful that others...
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3 posted 2000-04-27 12:36 PM


Brandon, this is a good poem, and all you say is true. But we all need to learn to appreciate all the time we are given on this earth, even the Mondays!  

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

brandondinsmore
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4 posted 2000-04-27 03:15 PM


duly noted.
lucky
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5 posted 2000-04-27 05:18 PM


You must be one of great baby boomers from the late great 60's free speach and love movement. I bet you listened to the Rolling Stones a little.

(Lucky) Dale, son of Thelma


 

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