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brandondinsmore
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since 1999-10-27
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0 posted 2000-04-26 09:18 AM


Pax Eros

Unattainable
Episodic miserable
Jaded by curtains fancy
And led by chains unknown

SUDDENLY!

Plural wise thoughts
-a hermit miser no more-
Revels in touch and correspondence
And the sweet beauty
of the sun
Oh, if thou would touch me once more,
-and never another-
I should be lost in love’s maze,
Never to seek wretched escape…

Slowly

But a dreary cold freezing still
Mangles my body and mind:
My own; that which I despise
And no other comforts,
No lover…

Yet

There is still and always hope,
Hope for fate and hope for
…Destiny
But I have yet to convince him…
I have yet to erase the sad;
Replenish the void with
Beautiful sunshine…

I am crying in the wrong soul,
For where I am is unanswered
And who I am remains a mystery…

I shall navigate the darkness in
Black tears
Waiting for illumination…

-someone stop this flow-
Isis’ name is now called


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netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
1 posted 2000-04-26 09:29 AM


Brandon - this is interesting -
almost like a play for a beginning
of a tragedy ---
then turns into hope --

netswan

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