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Alienation

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Lost Dreamer
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0 posted 04-26-2000 09:03 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Alienation

The walls morbid
and bare,
soul climbing
a mountain
full of despair.

Cavernous peaks
of joyfulness,
buried within avalanche
of emotions
denying happiness.

Destructive alienation
sledging time
faltering imagination
believing emptiness
rights the crime.

Iron cold bars
greet happy faces,
gorged mind
seeing illusions
lost in criminal places.

Incompetence to relate
to situations at hand
buckles undone
fate reeling
please return me
to promised land.



[This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 04-26-2000).]
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netswan
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1 posted 04-26-2000 09:09 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Very descriptive Lost Dreamer - so
darn sad

netswan
Denise
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Very sad, Gloria. I wish you brighter days.

Denise
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I forgot to say ((((HUGS))))

Denise
Rex Allen McCoy
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4 posted 04-26-2000 01:17 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

very sad poem ... you need to throw some stones in the river ... see if you can skip one all the way across

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Lost Dreamer
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5 posted 04-26-2000 09:16 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

netswan: Thanks for reading and replying

Denise: Thanks a million, your so kind

Rex: LOL, I couldn't skip a rock if I tried, and I have tried, right now it would probably hit a ripple and come back and clock me in the head...LOL Thanks for the laugh though  
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6 posted 04-26-2000 09:48 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

you been visiting here again without my seeing you??? next time, say hi, k?
Lost Dreamer
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7 posted 04-26-2000 11:42 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Doreen: Forgive me for my rudeness, I will correct my behavior in the future.  
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enjoyed
 
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