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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Whispering Winds ~*Marge Tindal*~ I hear them whisper your name, those mighty winds that blow. I know that you are close at hand. The winds just told me so. The direction from whence they blew I'm not sure I know. For only when I hear your name, am I sure the winds did blow. Caressing my face with a whisper, calling out your name. The winds of delight entice me. I will never be the same. I will follow the singing wind, where it leads me I will go. For the wind that blew you to me, will take me where I must go. Upward into the hills. calmly across the sea, hold on my love, I'm coming. The wind has set me free. Free to look and search this earth, no matter how far that may be. Free to follow the whispering wind, until it blows me back to thee. I hear your laughter on the wind. I try with all my might, to reach out to you on this windy night. I feel you getting close to me. I feel your whispered love. I will reach my hand to you. Please find me, my sweet dove. You grasp my hand in yours and softly speak my name, out of the whispering winds we are together again. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Another romantic wonder, Marge ... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Little Pepper~ You brighten my day !  Great big hugs ! No ... BIGGER THAN THAT ! *HUGS* Love ya' gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Brandyn Sand Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 82Columbia, SC |
A very picturesque description of deep love in spite of separation. *Whew!* I knew that feeling well for quite some time. These words took me back, and strengthened my appreciation for where I am now. Thanx so much! Sand |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sweet Marge~ your beautiful soul has done well here, this has come from way deep within and was written with intense freedom of heart..... So beautiful Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Marge, this is truly beautiful!! How clearly it shows that love cares not for distance...simply wonderful! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Marge, I am sitting here envious of your way with words. So beautiful. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Oh, what a beautiful place to be, how wonderful you let yourself go, so many people cannot, and this peace they will not know. Absolutely one of your best, hon. Corinne |
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WolfsMate Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 121New York |
Simply lovely! "You never have to worry...Never fear for I am near" |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge, this poem is so beautiful...and full of romance...I would travel the wind too, it sounds like such a lovely thing to do!! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) Marge* This is absolutely breathtaking...you certainly know how to capture the moment don't you my dear friend! Thank you so much for sharing your gift to express.Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Whipering into my ears, the lines from your expressive heart, wonderful feelings flow thorough your pen, which will never run dry... marvelous expressions, Sudhir Iyer |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Beautiful Marge ... you sure can cature a smile Rex}>{{{{o> |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Marge, this poem touched me very deeply. Great job. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful and romantic, Marge! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Brandyn~ So very glad you enjoyed. Welcome to Passions. Tracie~ You're something else ! Always there with a smile. ESP~ Thank you. Yeah, the distance is quickly covered when you go with the flow. Jeffrey~ Awwwww! I share ! All mine too ... Corinne~ Thank you ... you are so appreciated. WolfsMate~ Thank you. Glad you enjoyed. Martie~ I love the winds ... they blow with sure direction and take us where we should be. ButterfliesDC~ Tahnk you ... I just have to let it flow. Sudhir~ Thank you so much for your kind response. Welcome to Passion's. Rex~ Ahhhh ! That's just what life is all about ... sharing smiles ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
...sigh... Another lovely one~~~ Marie~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mariee~ I am one lucky lady to have such wonderful friends to share my thoughts with. Thank you so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Marge, After studying Greek and Hebrew in school I found the word "wind" to be synonymous with the word "spirit" it became one of my favorites, and needless to say so are you. "The wind it goeth and listeth wherever" And again it list with you. Very well done my dear. Lucky |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Beautiful poem  |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I'll think of a woman with beautiful words A woman with beautiful rhymes Each time a gentle breeze creates The tinkling of the chimes. You ALWAYS tinkle my chimes, Marge!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Lucky~ You captured it perfectly. Deep within my Cherokee heritage, the gentle wind is my spirit. Thank you, my dear. VanDana~ Thank you, hon. Balladeer~ May you always hear the chimes, my friend. You always make me feel good about my poetry. I thank you for that. ~*Marge*~< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 04-28-2000).] |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, Some how I missed this and it is so wonderful, I just had to let you know. It is always a delight to read you poems, Cerenity |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Marge, it's been a while since I've been in here and needless to say your writings still amaze me. This one is absolutely breathtaking. So back to the top it must go. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ I'm very pleased that you found it and even more that you liked it. Thank you, hon. Eloise~ How VERY, VERY pleased to see your smiling face back for a visit. Thank you for your kindness. Hope you are going to grace us with a poetic piece from your pen. Have a wonderful day, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tincan5 Junior Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 33 |
What a wonderful poem!!! Just beautiful |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TinCan~ Thank you. It holds special memories for me and I'm glad that I shared it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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