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Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London

0 posted 2000-04-26 04:01 AM


Foolish Fish


There's plenty  of  fish
in  the  endless  sea
and  I'm  as  foolish
as  they  can  be
So  fascinated
by  a  worm
they'll  trade  their  lifeblood
for  its'
squirm

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I'm  just  a  fish
upon  the  land
a  tuna  shark
that  learned  to  stand
I'll  stand  in  line
and  spend  my  wage
to  see  girls  squirming
on  a  stage

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Two  fish
one  snared  with  a  hook
the  other  hooked
for  just  a  look
The  fascination
of  a  squirm
creates  the  bond
to  fish
and
worm

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 I'm not ugly!
I'm just visually challenged!





[This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 05-22-2000).]

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Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
1 posted 2000-04-26 09:06 AM


try again

netswan
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2 posted 2000-04-26 09:12 AM


What a comparison, LOL

netswan

tracie66
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3 posted 2000-04-26 09:41 AM


As always this was good Rex.....
Tracie~


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


Butterflies_dont_cry
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4 posted 2000-04-26 10:52 AM


Rex* I've never seen "fishing" quite like this.... A very deep message within your words. This was great!


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.


Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
5 posted 2000-04-26 10:54 AM


netswan ... Tracie~ ... thankyou for reading
this morning
  
Butterflies_dont_cry ... you snuck in there on me ... thankyou



[This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 04-26-2000).]

WhtDove
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6 posted 2000-04-26 10:58 AM


Rex, fantastic piece! <*///><
Denise
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7 posted 2000-04-26 11:01 AM


Beware the bait! LOL

Denise

Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
8 posted 2000-04-26 12:59 PM


WhtDove ... oh ... you like the picture

dsnyder ... yah ... where is that worm ?

Martie
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9 posted 2000-04-26 01:36 PM


You know, those worms, they really dig the dirt!  Interesting poem.  
Rex Allen McCoy
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10 posted 2000-04-27 12:19 PM


Martie ... that must be it

Rex Allen McCoy
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