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Water Kisses and hugs

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Cuddlez
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0 posted 04-26-2000 12:29 AM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Cuddlez

Water Kisses and Hugs
Three years ago yesterday
I got in a fight with you
Three years ago tomorrow
I lost my best friend
Who could predict who or how
Or why or exactly when?
But somehow you fell in
To the rushing water
And sank right in
Scratching Heather's arm and legs
And she couldn't save you
You went downstream panicking
All the way, begging
For God to save you
But you were hugged by the water
And nothing worked
And on your 15th birthday---
Your funeral
Everyone planted water kisses
on your brow

 Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.


[This message has been edited by Cuddlez (edited 04-26-2000).]
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Parker
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1 posted 04-26-2000 12:37 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

This was sad, but I enjoyed to poem. I feels written with love.

Parker
wayoutwalt
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2 posted 04-26-2000 12:39 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

yipe sad and a nice tribute well written yuh
Cuddlez
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3 posted 04-26-2000 10:35 AM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

It's sad but not a tribute..... Just a story of how she died(really)

 Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.
Danny Holloway
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4 posted 04-26-2000 11:04 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

~~nice tribute, well written~~

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

Cuddlez
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Walla Walla, WA 99362


5 posted 04-27-2000 12:32 AM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

love your quote danny... she finally has a headstone today, too ).. three years after the fact

 Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.
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