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tulip
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0 posted 04-26-2000 12:27 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for tulip

A love so pure,
so simple in it's existence,
it touches the clouds.

A love so passionate,
so full of expresion,
it overwhelms life's unexpectancies.

A love so plain,
so compassionate,
it gives life meaning.

A love so beautiful,
so perfect,
you let it go.

© Copyright 2000 tulip - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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1 posted 04-26-2000 12:30 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

this is a nice thought well writ here yuh why do peeps do this when its so perfect?
Cuddlez
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2 posted 04-26-2000 12:31 AM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

I feel this way too sometimes... Someone lets everything go..........

 Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.
netswan
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3 posted 04-26-2000 03:31 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

"...
A love so passionate,
so full of expression,
it overwhelms life's unexpectancies.

This is great, Tulip. I especially love
the line in bold -----superb!

netswan
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 04-26-2000 04:21 AM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

Tulip - I love this poem - it's always sad when you let love go - but then again - if it was real love it may come back to you - I hope yours did.

Roniece
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5 posted 04-26-2000 09:33 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

Wayoutwalt,
Thank you.  I don't know why people do this, but the only thing to do is let it go, and if it is meant to be, it will be!
Cuddlez,
Doesn't it stink?!
Netswan,
I'm glad you liked it.
Roniece,
I truly believe if it's real, it will come back.  I don't know yet, but I'll find out!
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6 posted 04-26-2000 11:07 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Tulip,
I love the simpleness (is that a word?)Yet Power of this piece. Thank you for sharing it.

All my love,
Jeffrey
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7 posted 04-26-2000 11:17 PM       View Profile for pen of passion   Email pen of passion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pen of passion

Very nice writing Tulip.
tulip
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8 posted 04-27-2000 09:48 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

Jeffrey & Pen,
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
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wow
 
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