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tulip
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0 posted 2000-04-26 12:27 PM


A love so pure,
so simple in it's existence,
it touches the clouds.

A love so passionate,
so full of expresion,
it overwhelms life's unexpectancies.

A love so plain,
so compassionate,
it gives life meaning.

A love so beautiful,
so perfect,
you let it go.


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wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2000-04-26 12:30 PM


this is a nice thought well writ here yuh why do peeps do this when its so perfect?
Cuddlez
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2 posted 2000-04-26 12:31 PM


I feel this way too sometimes... Someone lets everything go..........

 Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

netswan
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3 posted 2000-04-26 03:31 AM


"...
A love so passionate,
so full of expression,
it overwhelms life's unexpectancies.

This is great, Tulip. I especially love
the line in bold -----superb!

netswan

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2000-04-26 04:21 AM


Tulip - I love this poem - it's always sad when you let love go - but then again - if it was real love it may come back to you - I hope yours did.

Roniece

tulip
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5 posted 2000-04-26 09:33 PM


Wayoutwalt,
Thank you.  I don't know why people do this, but the only thing to do is let it go, and if it is meant to be, it will be!
Cuddlez,
Doesn't it stink?!
Netswan,
I'm glad you liked it.
Roniece,
I truly believe if it's real, it will come back.  I don't know yet, but I'll find out!

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6 posted 2000-04-26 11:07 PM


Tulip,
I love the simpleness (is that a word?)Yet Power of this piece. Thank you for sharing it.

All my love,
Jeffrey

pen of passion
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7 posted 2000-04-26 11:17 PM


Very nice writing Tulip.
tulip
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8 posted 2000-04-27 09:48 PM


Jeffrey & Pen,
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

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9 posted 2004-05-02 09:09 PM


wow
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