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Slashed soul
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0 posted 04-25-2000 08:08 PM       View Profile for Slashed soul   Email Slashed soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Slashed soul

Through winters long and summers hot,
endless days, forget me nots,
flowers blooming, rainbows bright,
dew on grass, from the night,
cold morning air, frosty chill,
burger king - hold the dill.

Start the car, defrost the screen,
No shave this morning - I look mean!
traffic heavy, window down,
snake my way into pollution town,
lights blink, horns blair,
did I forget to brush my hair?

Place to work, place to live,
money earnt, no one to give,
hussle and hassle,
gripe and moan,
I just can't wait to get home!
false smiles, air miles, promotions,
what am I doing?

PC on, connect to web,
modem beeps - the go ahead,
check mail, then ICQ,
feed the cat, think of you,
Vodka drink, splash of coke,
read the jokes, make me choke!

Slumber ville here I come,
ready for the morning sun.....

-Rich-

(a typical day in my shoes)




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Butterflies_dont_cry
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1 posted 04-25-2000 08:14 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry


Hmmm I think I may have bumped into you during the ***** and moan today....lol this was a great read of your day...I don't think there are many moments that you missed   Thanks for sharing your day!


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.

pen of passion
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2 posted 04-25-2000 09:09 PM       View Profile for pen of passion   Email pen of passion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pen of passion

I like your rhythm R.
Mitch B
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3 posted 04-25-2000 09:23 PM       View Profile for Mitch B   Email Mitch B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mitch B

I see you saved the best for last...SLEEP!!
serenity blaze
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4 posted 04-26-2000 04:25 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

any old day will do....
---now, about that shave....
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 04-26-2000 04:30 AM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

I enjoyed reading about your day Slashed Soul -    Roniece
Meadowmuse
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6 posted 04-26-2000 09:36 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

It is in the daily details that we so often find the shadows of ourselves...this was quite cleverly shared, thank you!

~ Claire

 Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau
Cerenity
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7 posted 04-27-2000 08:58 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Slashed Soul,

What a day, I am so glad you get to visit us here though because I enjoy your poems and so forget the shave we would miss you!

Cerenity
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enjoyed this
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