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lucky
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho

0 posted 2000-04-25 06:17 PM


Two days before
the grand finale I was to have a 40 minute
interview these were times that I never looked forward
to our great agent also had us hooked in for the following
week for another two radio stations in Toronto it would
have been nice if he had of asked so I could of
consulted my crazy ephemeris first
but I sulked a bit and got
them cut by twenty
minutes yet I was
surprised to learn that
once the music went public it
wasn’t mine anymore “I thought that the
people would think the same things that I thought
about the songs when I wrote then it confused me to a
point and then I found it quite amusing that people could
read so much into specific words that had meant so very
little to me at the time and then vice versa—that some
things that I thought had great weight to them they
didn’t pick up at all” that took considerable
time and suffering on my part at first I
just assumed that sincerity was
my only option—that my
mission was to be as naked
to the media as my music what was
harder to accept as a spontaneous gesture
was my literal interpretations of these quaint
notions that they took upon themselves for
granted being in the profession for over
forty year and tiring of questions
I casually told them it was
time for my bath
and when they
didn’t move began
taking off my clothes not
thinking of the band the back up
vocalist out of disgust did the same
you would never have believed
what the headlines read
and it wasn’t
blooze.

deja vu.

[Oh yes, the saga continues. Stay tuned. Now back to bboog]
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[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 04-25-2000).]

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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
1 posted 2000-04-25 06:41 PM


lucky, I didn't know you were a musician...I have to go looking now for part 1, before you move on to part 4---I think I missed something.  I like it...more!
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho
2 posted 2000-04-25 07:35 PM


What a life it's been!  What hilarity we've known!
~ ~ ~
I see you're crawling around that dusty loft of your memory again, my dear!  Here, let me shine a lamp - can you find some more? You're such a rascal!


Meadowmuse
Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263

3 posted 2000-04-25 08:48 PM


Lucky, I enjoyed this segment in particular, and nod my head in the knowing...

"I found it quite amusing that people could
read so much into specific words that had meant so very
little to me at the time and then vice versa—that some
things that I thought had great weight to them they
didn’t pick up at all” that took considerable
time and suffering on my part"

~ Claire

 Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

lucky
Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho
4 posted 2000-04-25 10:23 PM


Martie'

Slow on the draw are ya, you need to get out of the garden sometimes... Nice ya caught it. I've been a musician since I was 6yrs. old and Rosemary's floks are also very good musicians as are many of our relatives, that includes RJ. Now there's some stories to tell...

Rosemary,

It's me Rascal Berry, Do remember how the kids would sleep in front of the tall PA system speakers. It's amazing that they can hear us at all today. Can't say that they have to much soul but they sure do like loud music. By the way, your a cute stinker.

Claire,

Your hanging in there for this. it's neat to make life poetic, and you know me... I love a story. Life "is" truely a miracle, nice to your part of it.

Thank you, and God bless you all.

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho
5 posted 2000-04-27 05:20 PM


Yes honey, I surely do remember the kids sleeping in front of those speakers, not just at home, but out at the barn where we absorbed your band practicing, and the luscious music so sweet I could taste it practically vibrated us all into outer space, while our kids slept peacefully on ... ah, good old days!  Your music just tickles all my senses, much as tons of your writing does.  You're a cute stinker yourself, you long tall Rascal Berry of mine!


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