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Seduction

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mariee66
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Recess, OfYourMind


0 posted 04-25-2000 05:14 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for mariee66

Gleaming bright
That sparkle in his eye
Enticing me
Drawing me inward.

The darkness of his iris
Flows over me
Seduces me
Weakens my will.

Yielding to his power
I collapse
I am fixed
Forever in his arms.

  


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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


1 posted 04-25-2000 05:19 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Need to call an HVAC man, sure is hot in here!!!
Janet Marie
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2 posted 04-25-2000 05:21 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

oooooooohhhhhhhhh
steamy and lovely marie
very nice...
like an afternoon delight
well written here my dear
and sweetly spicey
great work!! jm


 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon


mariee66
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Recess, OfYourMind


3 posted 04-25-2000 05:26 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

RH and JM...OHHH yeah!!
Thanks!
This was actually written about someone.
He is HOT!

Marie~
Jeffrey Carter
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State of constant confusion!


4 posted 04-25-2000 06:39 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

      

Smoking!!!



All my love,
Jeffrey
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5 posted 04-25-2000 09:00 PM       View Profile for pen of passion   Email pen of passion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pen of passion

The eyes get me all the time.  Great poem.
Mitch B
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6 posted 04-25-2000 09:07 PM       View Profile for Mitch B   Email Mitch B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mitch B

Sounds like a wonderful place to be!!!
At peace with life’s greatest mystery...
hsystems
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7 posted 04-25-2000 09:15 PM       View Profile for hsystems   Email hsystems   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hsystems's Home Page   View IP for hsystems

This is WONDERFUL, Marie - thank you so much for sharing it!  Now, if you'll excuse me, I have to chase Jeffrey down - looks like he stole my cigarettes (I was wondering what happened to them, LOL!)


Troy

 Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry
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Corinne
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state of confusion


8 posted 04-25-2000 09:25 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

I love that feeling, getting lost in his eyes. Feeling pulled into him.

Nicely said!

Corinne
Brandyn Sand
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9 posted 04-26-2000 07:28 AM       View Profile for Brandyn Sand   Email Brandyn Sand   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Brandyn Sand's Home Page   View IP for Brandyn Sand

"The darkness of his iris
Flows over me..." Whew!  

I met a man like that once --
Then, I married him!  

Nicely done!


 
netswan
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10 posted 04-26-2000 08:10 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

oh marie, I am seduced -----wow!
this is well ------haha It is very
enticing --)

I have come to expect great things from
you - since I came here, your poems
in CMGrimms challenge show much talent
and creativity ------and I see it here,
too.


netswan
tracie66
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11 posted 04-26-2000 08:21 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Mariee66 it's your fellow 66er here this was very intense as in the steamy variety  
tracie66


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

mariee66
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12 posted 04-26-2000 01:16 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Jeffrey~
Thank you!  Now give Troy back his cigarettes!  LOL!

Pen'o Passion~
The eyes are very alluring, eh??!

Mitch~
Hello, and welcome again!  Thanks for reading~

Troy~
Still need that light??


Corinne~
Thanks much  

Brandyn~
Thanks for reading and congrats!!

netswan~
Thank you for all the compliments~
Your work is very good, too!

tracie66~
Yes, my fellow 66'r  
Thank you!

Marie~

ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


13 posted 04-26-2000 01:26 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Whew!!....turn the fan on, it's steamy in here!!

Great poem...really dreamy!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London


14 posted 04-26-2000 01:53 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

Yielding to his power
I collapse
I am fixed
Forever in his arms.

or until the phone or door-bell
rings

or the kids bang on the door
wanting a drink

Rex}>{{{{o>
Martie
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15 posted 04-26-2000 01:55 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

I think you have fallen....into a place that sounds so familiar.  Enjoyed the poem!
mariee66
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16 posted 04-26-2000 03:09 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Lizzie~
Glad you liked  

Rex~
Try this next time you have fallen into her arms...
a) let the answering machine get the call
b) don't answer the door
c) lock the bedroom door, and have paper cups in the bathroom  

Martie~
So you know what I mean  
Thanks!

Marie~
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17 posted 05-13-2004 04:02 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

awesome
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