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galaxy84
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since 2000-04-24
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0 posted 2000-04-25 04:14 PM


Every thought is of you
Wanting you
Your lips
Your body
You
Needing you
Your love
Your strength
You
Longing for you
Your touch
Your caress
You
I have desire
For you

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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2000-04-25 05:24 PM


Whew!!! Hot hot hot,,,,Someone hand me a fan!!
galaxy84
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2 posted 2000-04-25 05:28 PM


thank you heart. im glad u like it. i hope u like my others also.

galaxy84

Blondie
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since 1999-08-06
Posts 307
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3 posted 2000-04-25 05:44 PM


well let me say...Hmmmmmmm
I think I'll borrow Romantic's fan...oo la la

loved it!

Jeffrey Carter
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State of constant confusion!
4 posted 2000-04-25 06:28 PM


WHEW!!!



Is it hot in here, or is it just me?

All my love,
Jeffrey


[This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 04-25-2000).]

galaxy84
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since 2000-04-24
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5 posted 2000-04-25 06:32 PM


i need everyone's honest opinion. are my poems really good? i thank all of you for taking time to read them. and jeffery, it's not hot in here, it's just me! LOL! i'm just joking with ya. thanks again.
galaxy84

mariee66
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Recess, OfYourMind
6 posted 2000-04-25 06:32 PM


Another steamy one on the forum...TSSSSS....
Marie~

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