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infinat3 sadn3ss
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0 posted 04-25-2000 03:57 PM       View Profile for infinat3 sadn3ss   Email infinat3 sadn3ss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for infinat3 sadn3ss

Under moon and ignorant sun ,
lies a purple number one .
Crawling through a neon desert ,
by a trumpet call left wounded and hurt .
hid inside a paper bag ,
golden medal , porno mag .
clutching mirror-man sand ,
blisters all over feet and hands .
109 in the shade ,
boy , he's really got it made .
bionic ,
ironic ,
is it a castle or a mirage ? ,
or just another reflective badge ? .
stolen off of the malignant troops ,
so dumb he could have made them jump through hoops .
His spying on the enemy ,
should get him paid hansomly .


 freedom is the right to say 2 + 2 = 4
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1 posted 04-25-2000 04:08 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

Interesting read.   I like the feel of it.
mete out
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2 posted 04-26-2000 09:52 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***cabes,
wow
what was the running thru your head when you wrote this one?
this is great...it has a great sense of urgency...
wow


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


mete out
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3 posted 05-07-2000 08:23 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

like a shooting st*r,
whoooosh!

up we go!


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


mete out
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4 posted 05-08-2000 08:48 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

and again,
fly my pretty, FLY!


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


Enola
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5 posted 05-08-2000 09:08 AM       View Profile for Enola   Email Enola   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enola

Wow!  I dunno what else to say. You're literally whooping ass boy!

 The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition.
PericolosoAmore
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6 posted 05-08-2000 04:17 PM       View Profile for PericolosoAmore   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PericolosoAmore

This was fantastic. write another.
how did you learn to write lie that.
I shall look the rest of your poetry up.
P.A.
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