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kimberly d
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since 2000-04-25
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0 posted 2000-04-25 03:53 PM


You walk into my thoughts
do you know you do this?
I leave this place, this existence
and rush to you
like waves crashing against the rocks.
I cannot stop myself
or even slow my pace.
I surrender to you,
mind, heart and body.
To your voice, your touch, your lips.
I am at your mercy.
The power you have over me is frightening,
but I do not want this sweet torment to end.
It consumes me until there is nothing left,
and you leave me as you found me...
wanting you, needing you,
until you walk into my thoughts again.


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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
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1 posted 2000-04-25 04:04 PM


This was excellent and beautifully written. I enjoyed it and can relate to the feeling for sure.  
Welcome.


 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-04-25 04:06 PM


The power you have over me is frightening,
but I do not want this sweet torment to end.
It consumes me until there is nothing left,
and you leave me as you found me...
wanting you, needing you,
until you walk into my thoughts again.
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Wow!! These words are powerful!! Welcome to Passions...may your stay be long and fulfilling!

Love and hugs to you,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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