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Enotneicna
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since 1999-06-06
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Oakland, Or, USA

0 posted 2000-04-25 03:23 PM



My halfside and I became Godparents the day before Easter!  Both mother and baby-girl were christened..........I wrote this the day after Easter.

Reborn

Fire, hot and bright
.....to burn away a past
..........and prepare for a new beginning
Water, to quench the fire
.....to wash away the ashes
..........and let the pheonix rise
Air, sweet and fresh
.....a breath from God
..........to renew a soul.
Nourishment, body and blood
.....to feed a heart
..........and instill new faith.

SLR
4-24-00


 Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!



© Copyright 2000 Sharon Lee Wilcox (Enotneicna) - All Rights Reserved
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
1 posted 2000-04-25 04:13 PM


Beautifully done.   Welcome.


 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"

Enotneicna
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since 1999-06-06
Posts 340
Oakland, Or, USA
2 posted 2000-04-25 11:44 PM


Temptress, thank you.
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3 posted 2000-04-26 12:28 PM


Sharon~
Firstly .. congratulations !
Nextly ... this is a wonderful
tribute to the ocassion.
Tenderly rendered.
~*Marge*~
(hope you can tell I'm glad to see you back)



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
4 posted 2000-04-26 03:33 AM


Very well done.  Congrats on the Godchild


netswan

Enotneicna
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since 1999-06-06
Posts 340
Oakland, Or, USA
5 posted 2000-04-27 05:37 PM


Marge,
Yes, I can tell you're happy I'm back.  And we are just tickled about our godchild.

Netswan,
Thank you very much.

 Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!



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