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Blondie
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since 1999-08-06
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0 posted 2000-04-25 03:02 PM



I drove my sister one day
And what did she say?
"I hate you"
What did I do?
Pulled in Burger King
"Out!" I did sing
She jumped out
And gave a shout
I drove away
Mom said, "You'll pay."
'Cause now go look-
I'm the head cook


AT BURGER KING!!!

*thought it was a little amusing...and it is a true story.  I got mad at my sister dropped her off at Burger King and made her walk home.  My mom got mad at me made me fill out an application for Burger King and now I am the one flipping your burgers behind the scene.  bows please no roses  

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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
1 posted 2000-04-25 04:17 PM


LOL! Well, how do you like it?   I've done that scene already, and eventually hated it. All I can say is ICK! LOL!   I hope it works better for you than it did for me.  


 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"

Blondie
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since 1999-08-06
Posts 307
Ohio
2 posted 2000-04-25 05:37 PM


Temptress~
I hate it!!!  I hate food anyways, so working with all of these greasy stuff is even worse.  I must warn you, don't ever get the chicken sandwich because the lettuce on it is old and people tend to drop it on the ground because it's kind of slippery.  EWWWWW!!!  Passions

Cutie Putootie
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since 2000-01-20
Posts 54
Ohio
3 posted 2000-04-25 05:38 PM


Love it Melissa!  I can see your mom getting mad at you because I would too  
Dusk Treader
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4 posted 2000-04-25 06:16 PM


LOL!  Funny poem!  I can sympathize with working with food.. I've done it for 2 years.  And a great big YUCK for that chicken!  That's awful! (not that I don't have my horror tales).  Excellent little poem  

 Abrahm Simons

"...Watching fate as it flows down the path we have chose" - Trent Reznor, "We're in this Together"


Blondie
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5 posted 2000-04-25 09:20 PM


Thanks Dusk...I'M SICK OF FAST FOOD!! haha
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