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Nobody (Isis Challenge)

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Echo Rhayne
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Canyon Country, CA


0 posted 04-25-2000 03:01 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Have you ever felt like nobody
just a tiny speck of air
when everyone's around you
and you are just not there?
When you are very lonely
and no one seems to care
when everyone ignores you
and acts like you're not there?

Have you ever felt like nobody
when frieds make fun of you
when people say we're friends
but it really isnt true?
Sometimes you feel like you're unloved
and no one wants to care
when everyone has a friend
and you're alone somewhere!

Have you ever felt like nobody
just a tiny speck of dirt
you're always getting stepped on
and always getting hurt?
I guess if you have
then you know how I feel
but because I am a person
in time will I heal?


 I'm not waving, I'm drowning!


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Irie
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Posts 1526
Washington State


1 posted 04-25-2000 03:10 PM       View Profile for Irie   Email Irie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irie

Oh yes my dear, I have felt that pain.
I know just how you feel.
And yes, time will heal.
Very beautifully written.

~Sheri
ESP
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since 01-25-2000
Posts 2574
Floating gently on a cloud....


2 posted 04-25-2000 03:34 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

This is a brilliant reply to the challenge and boy can I empathise!! Great poem and thanks for sharing it!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
Meadowmuse
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3 posted 04-25-2000 03:50 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

I imagine everyone can relate to having these feelings at some point, and you've described them so well...very nicely written.  

~ Claire

 Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau
lucky
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4 posted 05-15-2000 11:39 PM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

Well,

Come to think of it, up late I been feelin' like a canyon without an Echo and a summer sun has dried the Rhayne's. Is there a drought draught draught draught draught



 If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley)
CSwtThng
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5 posted 05-15-2000 11:46 PM       View Profile for CSwtThng   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CSwtThng

Everyone feels like this sometimes. Sometimes you feel like you're alone even if you're with someone. Great poem.
WhtDove
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6 posted 05-16-2000 11:04 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Will you heal? Yes! Are you a nobody? NO

Can I relate to this and have I felt the same way? You betcha!

But ya know I love ya sweetie    HUGS
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