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Cutie Putootie
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since 2000-01-20
Posts 54
Ohio

0 posted 2000-04-25 02:55 PM


I can feel your pain...
but I can't reach you.

I can touch your wounds...
but I can't clean them.

I can smell your fragrance...
but it diminishes slowly.

I can taste your hunger...
but I can't feed you.

I can see your helplessness...
but I can't give my love.

The only thing I have is you...
but please don't take that away too.


 "If you live to be a hundred, I want to be a hundred minus one day so I never have to live without you."

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Blondie
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since 1999-08-06
Posts 307
Ohio
1 posted 2000-04-25 05:40 PM


This is beautiful!  I just love it!  
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