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reeree
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 4
Erie,PA

0 posted 2000-04-25 12:55 PM




Last night, as I fell into your eyes
Last night, be both were mesmerized
Last night, It was just us two
Last night, I fell in love with you

Last night, We danced the lovers dance
Last night, was filled with romance
Last night, you made me want you
Last night, you proposed and I said I do

Last night, I put my heart in your hands
Last night, I took an ultimate chance
Last night, you said you only wanted me
Last night, we began our journey.....
            
             LAST NIGHT!!!!!!!

© Copyright 2000 Shirea Mitchell - All Rights Reserved
WolfsMate
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 121
New York
1 posted 2000-04-25 02:19 PM


Nicely done. Welcome to Passion's.

 "You never have to worry...Never fear for I am near"

Irie
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since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
2 posted 2000-04-25 02:20 PM


How lovely ReeRee.....
Welcome to Passions  

~Sheri

Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
3 posted 2000-04-25 02:24 PM


Sounds like a wonderful night--welcome to Passions.
Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
4 posted 2000-04-25 02:25 PM


Lots of happy expression with this poem.
Sounds like love in springtime bloom
welcome to Passions~~~~~

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
5 posted 2000-04-25 02:29 PM


Welcome to passions!  What a beautiful first post.  Sounds like that was the best night of your life, thanks for sharing!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
6 posted 2000-04-26 05:51 AM


Welcome...welcome to our passions Family...Loved your poem!:0
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
7 posted 2000-04-26 06:04 AM


Welcome!  I enjoyed your poem  

Roniece

netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
8 posted 2000-04-26 07:13 AM


Welcome to Passions, reeree!
Last night, must have been a great night.
Lovely poem

netswan

First__Knight
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 678

9 posted 2000-04-26 07:15 AM


Welcome to Passions.....I need nights like this.....hehe    Nicely done
Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
10 posted 2000-04-26 07:22 AM



This is great...and yes we should all be blessed with a few nights like this!! A wonderful entrance!


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.


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