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~Salvation In Surrender~

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Janet Marie
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0 posted 04-25-2000 09:04 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Janet Marie

Listen not to voices that speak only of lies and confusion,
their jealous haze shall neither taint nor fade this perfect and poetic illusion.
Deceit falls now on only deafened ears ...
this between us ... they cannot divide,
This unison of fate, sweetly entrusted ... shall not be questioned or denied.
Words of poison are to never again be recognized by these eyes of mine,
surrender be my salvation,
thy whispered devotion heard ...
thy words be divine.
Bound by common threads of love,
a tapestry laced with faith, trust, and desire ...
woven with golden strands of commitment and contentment ...
all things a heart does require.
Jaded eyes need now to only look away ... for they are blinded by our light,
as we breathe in the many pleasures of this gift ... absolution now in sight.
Though forces work to sow seeds of fear and doubt ...
no promises were ever broken,
hearts and souls entwined, the ties that bind grow stronger ...
the truth now so sweetly spoken.


Janet Marie


for my partner in rhyme,
as always, thank you for the inspiration.



 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon


© Copyright 2000 Janet Marie - All Rights Reserved
Jeffrey Carter
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1 posted 04-25-2000 09:14 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Janet,
Your partner in rhyme must be pretty special to inspire such beautiful words as these.

Bound by common threads of love,
a tapestry laced with faith, trust, and desire ...
woven with golden strands of commitment and contentment ...
all things a heart does require.
Jaded eyes need now to only look away ... for they are blinded by our light,
as we breathe in the many pleasures of this gift ... absolution now in sight.
Though forces work to sow seeds of fear and doubt ...
no promises were ever broken,
hearts and souls entwined, the ties that bind grow stronger ...
the truth now so sweetly spoken.


All my love,
Jeffrey
brandondinsmore
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2 posted 04-25-2000 09:21 AM       View Profile for brandondinsmore   Email brandondinsmore   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brandondinsmore

Excellent dish here.  I like lots.  Explain, please.  Nice style and rhymes.


(scheme.)
Butterflies_dont_cry
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3 posted 04-25-2000 09:30 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry


Beautiful words from a beatutiful heart.  Yes your partner in rhyme must be pretty special....for he has you   Through adversity and struggle love of the purest shall only deepen and remain stronger than it did when you began. **AW hugs and BF kisses** S.S. and it's wonderful to see your *smile* back again  


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.

TerryW
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4 posted 04-25-2000 01:50 PM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

Janet Marie~
     Dear, you have "WOW"ed me again!!
Absolutely Lovely!



 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
Marina
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5 posted 04-25-2000 02:05 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Your partner in rhyme is very lucky to have such a wonderful poet in thier life. You write so beautifully and this is one is no exception.

Marina
Martie
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6 posted 04-25-2000 02:10 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Bound by common threads of love,
a tapestry laced with faith, trust, and desire ...
woven with golden strands of commitment and contentment ...
all things a heart does require.

This sounds like the perfect lovey love to me...and your poem is beautiful!!
Danny Holloway
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7 posted 04-25-2000 02:12 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

BEG~~~you shine!
ellie LeJeune
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8 posted 04-25-2000 03:26 PM       View Profile for ellie LeJeune   Email ellie LeJeune   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ellie LeJeune

Dear Janet Marie: this is so very beautiful. so romantic! " bound by common threads of love". You've outdone yourself again. I love this poem! Love, Ellie

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mariee66
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9 posted 04-25-2000 05:49 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Beautifully written~
This is great!
Marie~
Janet Marie
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10 posted 04-26-2000 08:01 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

THANK YOU ALL...for such glowing praise...
I appreciate you all so very much.

Hi ELLIE!! so nice to have you in open!!  
thank you.

brandon...Lets just say this is my poetic reply to actions of envy.
its about not letting someone with jaded intentions cause my heart problems.
make sense?

thanks to all here for the read and replies.
take care, jm

 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon


Parker
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11 posted 04-26-2000 11:27 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Ah Janet, a true surrender to you desired one. He must be very special. this was so nice of you to share.

Parker
Denise
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12 posted 04-26-2000 11:31 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautiful, Janet Marie!

Denise
AVANTI
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13 posted 07-13-2000 11:55 PM       View Profile for AVANTI   Email AVANTI   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AVANTI

janet...
such an awesome piece
wow!
simply charming...sucha smooth flow...
loved it?
why aint't in the book???

If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

 
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