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kristi
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0 posted 2000-04-25 12:07 PM


Your name on my lips.

Your hand on my thigh.

The sway of your hips.

The look in your eyes.

Your caress in the night.

Your laugh in the air.

Your smile in the light.

The wave of your hair.

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1 posted 2000-04-25 12:11 PM


The Things I Love:

This poem!!!

Welcome to passions

All my love,
Jeffrey

[This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 04-25-2000).]

Butterflies_dont_cry
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2 posted 2000-04-25 12:15 PM


And then some....lol
This is great Kristi!!!


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.


netswan
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3 posted 2000-04-25 12:41 PM


Welcome to Passions, Kristi
This is so sweet ----)

netswan

Irie
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Washington State
4 posted 2000-04-25 01:17 AM


Short but certainly sweet!  

Welcome to Passions Kristi


EagleOne
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5 posted 2000-04-25 02:57 AM


I loved it!  

 Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
6 posted 2000-04-25 02:59 AM


Welcome to passions!!!

Loved your poem!!

angel6917
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7 posted 2000-04-26 10:31 AM


Cute poem, Kristi!  Welcome to Passions.  
Lots of love,
Kristi Lynn
(Like my name?)

kristi
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since 2000-04-24
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Yulee, FL
8 posted 2000-04-26 05:33 PM


Thanks to all of you who took the time to reply!  I really appreciate it.  

Kristi Lynn- of course, I love your name!!
  mine is Kristi Marie!!!

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9 posted 2000-04-26 05:49 PM


A delightful breath of fresh air is this poem! WELCOME!
passing shadows
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10 posted 2004-05-13 03:44 AM


nice
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