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Effigy
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disbelief

0 posted 2000-04-24 08:55 PM


I wish that I could feel,
but you can not touch my reality.
I wish that my eyes would open,
but you can not see these phantoms,
these dreams of mine.



 understanding is misunderstood


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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2000-04-24 10:18 PM


Excellent! I like this a lot...to the point and full of meaning..
Effigy
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disbelief
2 posted 2000-04-25 12:41 PM


Poet deVine- thanks I am fairly fond of it myself. I'm glad that you liked it.
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